All Comments on 'Futa and The Cuck's Wife Ch. 01'
by lilithbegone
- 10 Comments
love this story great work would like to see it evolve a little further, maybe even the husband being turned into a real woman and getting pregnant
First third good. Second third with Futa on male could have done without. Last third accepting wife's pregnancy by Futa just tanked it for me. Better luck next time.
i dont know why people are giving low ratings? this was 5 stars for me! i wish there was more!
It seems literally all the negative ratings are just from people who dislike the fetish.
To someone whose opinion is applicable, this is great. Can't wait for more futacuck from you.
Lost me right at the start. A 4 year deployment with no time off for home leave. Maybe WWII not current day. Four years in he'll and you expect him to just roll over for a cute who thinks its dominant. No cuts and wife are bare asked naked on front lawn 10 seconds after they are discovered. For a work of fiction were curse don't strain credulity this wimp knees from a soldier did..
Decent story. Felt rushed near the end. I advise getting an editor or doing more proof reading because the man definitely shouldn't have tentacles.
-- He just gave up / submitted, .... lost his wife, and is going to raise Isabella's children, .... wow! ... not what I'd expect from a horny soldier, just back from a long deployment, why didn't Emma talk / write to him about here loneliness? ... Did not like Andrew's actions much, but I did think sexy Isabella was pretty awesome, not very ethical, but sexy awesome, .... More sexy shemales please, ....
-- I'm just not into stories about destroying guys, ... keep trying, and edit better too, .... ;-) ttfn