All Comments on 'Giving It Away To The Bride'
by CuriousThroat2
- 7 Comments
A right proper wedding. I liked the applause at the end though I wish there had been more audience participation. Maybe some matronly fucking in the aisle. And the minister could have had his cock out, stroking, during the ceremony. At the end it would have been nice if he had said, "Go ahead and fuck her." Good job!
I really liked this story. It's not just the normal taboo story. I hope there will be more stories like this in the future.
Oh for sure it could have been longer. I was shooting for ~1000 words, as per the forum member's original request. I might have gone a couple hundred other. I bet he didn't mind. =)
Oh, and Rancoor: That would be "What AN abominable shit". Remember that vowels modify "a" and "an". Thanks for reading.
That has just got to be the hottest story I have ever read, but it is far far too short, can you, will you please write another chapter, but from the beginning, with a slow pace to start with, then slowly building to a mighty crescendo & do not leave out any minute details.