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Click hereEventually it started to ebb away. Kim's movements slowed down. And her moans decreased in intensity. But they still continued, just becoming softer and more like muttering. Her head lay limp against Erin's shoulder. Erin stopped stroking Kim and instead was holding her with her arms wrapped tight. She was gently kissing Kim's forehead. For a long while, Kim just lay like that with her eyes closed. At first, Erin could feel Kim's heart racing and her ragged breath. As they rested like that, those slowly calmed, Finally Kim's eyes fluttered open.
"Oh Erin, thank you Ma'am! You made me so happy and gave me such pleasure," Kim smiled up at her.
Smiling back Erin simply said, "I love you, Kim. I wanted you to be happy."
"I am, Erin. I hope you are too!" Kim had a very serious look on her face.
Reaching over, Erin brushed some stray hairs out of Kim's face. She leaned over and lightly kissed Erin. "I am, my little pet. I hope you can tell!"
Kim turned over and got up on her hands and knees and started helping Erin get her clothes off. "I think so, Erin. I hope you will tell me if you stop being happy, okay?"
Pulling her sweater over her head and dropping it, Erin lifted her hips so that Kim could help her get off her skirt. "I will," she assured Kim.
Kim got up and blew out the candles before silently padding her way back to bed. As they both slipped under the covers, they cuddled together and exchanged soft kisses for long minutes. Over time, the pause between the kisses grew and then they ended as both of them drifted off to sleep.
- COMMENTS
That was definitely a slippery move kim … upfront with such feelings would have been the perfect move because this could have been turned into heartbreaking heartaches, for both
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Well done. Some people need the security of being led. Strong leadership can be a comfort
I like this story and the characters but I must admit that I dont/can't understand the need to submit totally to someone. That someone is willing to forfeit their own power totally for someone else is foreign and somewhat disturbing to me. That being said I want to know where Kim and Erin go and how their story continues?
Thank you for this story!
Please add more chapters!
So, 8 months later, I reread this.
I have done a fair amount of research on D/s relationships in the meantime. I had a very hard hatred for the idea when I first encountered it, as you can see from my comments 8 months ago.
I have a better understanding of the imbalance of such a relationship. I still think it's a very precarious way to live, one person doing *everything* short of worship of the other. I think it's really really risky. If, in this example, they try it and Erin can't do it (and everything about her personality as presented here says to me she will tire of it fairly quickly) Kim will come out even more damaged. And even more likely to be taken advantage of in the next relationship.
This sort of worship the one and take care of the other puts an unreasonable responsibility on the domme. Anyone who puts the effort into it for their sub *knows* they are responsible for them. But then, what happens when they find they can't go through with the inequality in the relationship, or even just tires of the sub. Then they must choose to seriously *damage* the sub they had been taking care of. And any good domme, even one that doesn't want to be one, will resist throwing the sub away knowing the damage it will do. So, they procrastinate, staying in a bad relationship just to keep from hurting the sub. But they will eventually … and it'll hurt even more. The consequence of a failure is too likely and too great to risk.
I think, in general, this is pretty evil. Most outsiders would assign the evil on the domme, wanting to dominate and control someone else. But the *real* evil is in the sub, abdicating their lives to someone else. It's a kind of sociopathy, someone who needs not to live in the real world. Wanting someone else to take care of their every need, make all their decisions. That's pretty damaged. And weak.
But that's just my most recent rant on D/s, not about this story.
The core flaw of this story, or rather of the relationship it builds, is Kim lying. She effectively *tricked* Erin into falling in love with her, after which she had no choice but to agree to Kim's wishes. Very, very weak and selfish.
Not a character I'd ever want to even know, much less have a relationship with.
All I can say is: Bullshit.
At their ages, this won't even last a year. This is not what Erin expected or wanted out of a relationship. It will collapse. Erin wanted a partner relationship. No matter how much she wants to be what Kim wants her to be: She is what she is.