All Comments on 'It Started With a Kiss'
by ZenZerker
- 16 Comments
One of the best stories on here in terms of believable characters and build-up. Well written. (Well, sometimes you like adjectives too much, but they always fit.) Great job of creating both inner and inter-personal conflict, with Carol and Charlie as very believable foils for the siblings; then the overcoming those conflicts. This clearly is a love-story, not just a fuck-story. I like that!
A great story and so well thought out. My wife and I read this in bed and it made us both so horny that she actually told me that when she was in her teens that she and her brother would fool around, not have full on sex but she would wank or suck his cock and make him cum and that she would show him how to finger fuck her and suck her pussy and clit until she would cum. Her parents would let them sleep in the same bed because they thought that brother and sister wouldn't get up to anything sexual and it was just sibling affection. My wife told me that she was eighteen at the time and her brother was just turned sixteen needless to say we have had great sex with her telling me the things that they got up to when they could.
I just loved this story, especially the way the brother loved his sister and wanted to take care of her and the sex was hot because of that!!! Thank you for a wonderful read!!!
I love this story!!!!
it really can get someone turned on!!!!
this got me so wet and horny... i need to fuck bad now.
A perfect story in every way!The love,the passion,the emotion,the lust.
Nothing was missing from this story!Congratulations and keep up the terrific work my friend,i wish you the best!
Really hot. Why not. Love like it should be. You could easily add 2 or 3 chapters to the story.
The Story Is More Like A Fairytale!!! Unffolds Like A Dream Come True Incedent ... So Erotic ... Yet So Very Innocent !!! Keep Writing. We Just Love Your Eroticism!!!
Holy... You're obsessed with anal. Lol like I'm reading the story and boom butt stuff and it goes on and on and I just couldn't stop laughing. Lol
Would have been better if they hadn't wasted their virginities on idiots, especially Annie. Too bad. Also this anal obsession, damn!
Anal doesn't arouse me at all.
A girl's wet slippery pussy is 100% better than a sphincter muscle ring around your cock.
But sex stories & sex videos all feature that & it's redundant & boring.
2 stars