All Comments on 'LILY & Football Player Brother Ch. 02'
by Daddysgirlfl
- 18 Comments
Pretty crappy for the wife to treat the husband but kudos to Stevie for being a standup kind of guy.
Ha Ha no goodbye fuck for the cheater, well played. You keep me aroused.
More please!!......love the story and can't wait to see where things go from here.
Good story---keep it going, but try not to be stupid like so many other authors in Literotica are. By that I mean, keep it light, not complicated. Don't introduce a ton of characters. Just keep it fun. Thanks
Another power slam of a story, lady. Again mesmerized with your smooth flow with a protagonist (a hit minx) who was a hot lady in public and an even hotter, slutty minx. Here’s to chapter three. This old coot is waiting for it
I like the way you have taken your time with your descriptions of the sex, and with their relationship in general. 'Getting rid' of the wife seems to signal that there will be more. Perhaps a poker game? Lily is going to have adventures once college begins; I'm sure. You have an adorable character who is beginning to develop into something much more. It could even spin off into a whole different series? Think about it.
~B
Love your characters, and your characterization of Steve and Lily. Steve is one very sexy guy -- his hairy chest, nipples, abs, back, thighs, everything on this guy screams sex. I'm glad he and his sister have become a couple. They have everything going to keep each other oh so happy! Write more about their sex adventures!
Telling your friends you & your sister are naked together & getting positive feedback, dressing up, then making out in public w people knowing you're siblings- this is my FAVE fantasy! I enjoy your writing style!
Did not like the story. Did not like the way he treated his wife. His sister gave him the out he wanted and just waited for his wife to leave which he knew was going to happen soon. His wife was not stupid and knew they were lovers. So, she found someone who actually appreciated her.
So hot. Yes, the incest is fun. But that doesn't really matter at all. *LILY* is fun! God, to have a woman like her. (And to have the money to treat her as Lily is being treated! :-) I came close to that once, long ago. Not the money bit, the wonderful girl bit. I kept comparing Lily to her. Lily much of the time came up more interesting in what she did, but maybe that was because Stevie was more interesting too, and brought out the best in her. I still prefer the girl I had to Lily (because she was mine!). But I bet she would have really liked these stories.
Keep up the good work!
I’ve been re-reading this so many times. Please ignore those hateful negative comments. You’re a good writer and I love the way you write. Please do continue with this series. Loving it. Please post more