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Click hereShane had to be an ass and told Bill, "Well look who's here? Have you got in her pants yet? She's pretty good when she gets going you know!"
Big time mistake on his part, as a result of that comment Bill proceeded to finish the job I started and mopped the floor with him.
The aftermath of that was mall security showed up and it took three of them to pull Bill off Shane, then the regular cops made an appearance followed by an ambulance for Shane, and boy did he ever need one.
There were lots of witnesses that saw what happened and as a result of our actions Bill and I were charged with assault and battery. We both spent some time in the clink but we both had smiles pasted on our faces that wouldn't go away. That time behind bars actually felt pretty good when we understood why we were there.
After the court and other proceedings Shane disappeared. I think he knows how we feel about him.
- COMMENTS
Yeah I know, we had hurt each other bad. Errrrrr, had you not had sex with the prat he would not have felt he had needed to have run away. Again I would have liked to see more information of how the magic affected them. Something like, the magic between use was so strong that had you put and electric lamp between us it would have lit up on its own. When we had sex the magic made it far more intense and we could feel each emotions build up.
I wish there were more details about their “tough discussions”. I can’t believe she cheated on him more than once. One time was bad enough but then she did it again? What is it with cheaters who are supposedly going to break it off with whoever their cheating with, but end up cheating on them “one last time”? It just makes them look even more slutty and even less intelligent than their already borderline retarded status. Anyway, I liked the story and didn’t mind them reconciling as she didn’t keep slutting around. I still really wish their more detailed discussions would have been included as that’s the “meat” of them trying to put things back together.
This story is a retelling yes. That said it is still a very good story, well written with very keen insight and thoughtful delivery. Bravo. xoxoxo Annette
I made the mistake of reading Bill's story first. This was simply a rehashed repeat with nothing new to add to the story. It was a boring read after reading the original.