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Click hereShe was riding up and down on me fast and hard, but just as she was about to climax she impaled herself fully on me and stayed there. Her knees squeezing into my ribs, her tight wet pussy muscles massaging "her" cock and holding it in place as it erupted inside of a woman for the very first time.
My whole body convulsed, and I shouted "OH MISTRESS SOFIA, HOLY FUCK I'M CUMMING" as I began to squirt inside of her. This was better than I ever thought possible. Her red fingernails dug into my chest as waves of pleasure coursed through her body. I had lost all control of my muscles and just laid there with every muscle tensed.
It took a few moments for both of us to regain our senses. She leaned down and rested on my chest. We were both breathing heavily. Her pussy still wrapped around me. In a soft, gentle voice she said "It is very special to me to be your first. Knowing I got to take your virginity will always be something I cherish."
"I'm glad it was you. This was more special and amazing than I ever thought it would be. Thank you for this. I wouldn't change it for anything." was my only response to her. Even though she had tied me to the bed and was in charge the entire time she had sex with me in a very passionate and caring way. I had meant what I said.
Once we both recovered, she sat up and looked down and me and smiled. She then slid up my body and ordered me to clean her pussy. I didn't have a choice as I was still tied up, but I loved the view of her as she sat on my face. I pushed my tongue inside of her and licked out both of our cum. She brought herself off to another powerful climax on my face as I happily worshipped her sex with my tongue.
A couple of days later she had moved out. She was no longer the sexy woman next door, but she was of course so much more now. I would still miss having her as my neighbor.
Now a little over a year later in her new home, I was her 20 year old sex slave. She had just turned 50 a few days earlier and had her spikey heels digging into my back as I was her footrest. She finished her wine and finally spoke to me.
"I have a friend who is in need of some stress relief. I have decided to lend you to her for an evening."
to be continued...
It's a pity you don't understand grammar.
Learn when to use to and too as well as your and you're.
"but his fiancée', Jennifer, instead family be included." I assume that was the result of some auto-correction and no real mistake because it must be and was obviously meant that she insisted family be included. (INSISTED)
Good premise.
Sex too automatic.
Before she had him undress and service her it needed dialog about how he liked her body. Did he ever fantatsize about it? What did he imagine? Did he watch porn? What kind? Did he like it where the woman controlled the man?
Three stars.
I really enjoyed this story. Very well written but my favorite part is the realism. I enjoy a wide range of stories from mild to extreme but this story is one that “could actually happen”. I hope it inspires beautiful women everywhere to seek out and sexually dominate the men in their lives. What 18 year old man (boy) wouldn’t kill to serve a gorgeous older woman like this. Thank you for this story. I look forward to reading more in the series.
I'm glad that she was a kind mistress, but making a naive 18 year old your "slave" with a collar and all the commands and servitude seems a very exploitative thing to do to a young man. BDSM servitude to a mistress is an older mans kink. She's setting him up to have a submissive nature that will not help him at all with women his own age, and he may have difficulty finding a mate should he want to marry and have kids. And no, foot worshipping collared slaves, wouldn't make good dads. I imagine. You have to be confident and show an example for your kids. I haven't read the other chapters so my critique is perhaps unfair to the author.
Wonderful story, very well paced. It brings back fond memories of a special friend....
My comment, which should appear immediately before this one, was accidentally posted anonymously. This is just to tell you who wrote it and, as I said in my previous comment, to serve as a reminder to return and read some more of your work.
Very much my favorite kind of story. And very well written. Thank you, and please write more.
I loved this story and look forward to its continuation, especially with her new secluded house with the "special room". Lots of possibilities. As for the critics, I think we all know that these stories are not Pulitzer prize novels, so some errors in grammar or semantics should not detract from the enjoyment of reading them. I know from my own experience writing for Literotica that it is a long, tedious job, requiring dedication. For that, I thank you for your effort. Keep it up, please.
Liked this very much. And no, it was not too long, just right to get the feeling. Hope you do not let us wait long for the next chapter(s) :-)
Don't let the haters get you down. This was a great story. Would certainly enjoy more chapters.
Yeah ok, maybe an 18 year old guy would fuck a near 50 year old as a one time thing. But c'mon who'd stay with a wrinkly old fucker who exploits him. Plenty more younger pussy wanting fucking and without the complications.
a little long but very sexy. I love the way she was not the mean, harsh mistress. Loving and caring is my version of the perfect mistress. Just a shame it took a year before he got the "goods". You would think a boy of 18 would fall in love with this woman and admit it to her. We know how she cares about him lovingly. Possibly loving him too?
Can't wait until the next chapter. This is a loving relationship. Please don't change that.
Nice premise.
But...
You sure need an editor. Wrong spellings. Typos. Wrong words, altogether.
The submission to her is nice. But there's almost no getting him excited. No playing with his cock and/or balls. No forcing him to tell her what he fantasizes about about her. No conversation about what kind/s of porn he watches, and what gets him off. No teasing him with her body.
It's all -- or almost all -- merely submission, doing what she says he should do, and eating her pussy until she orgasms. Frankly, it gets repetitious.
Four stars.