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- Miss Florence Ch. 01
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All Comments on 'Miss Florence Ch. 01'
by R410a
- 13 Comments
Need the chapter, Need to know if she had given her cherry to him and does he leave her after she did?
Nice story, well written. Loved the content and presentation, can't wait for chapter 2.
I love this story!!! I don't have any negative things to say about it. The character development is among the best stories on the site. This can go on through the process of working of achieving the full range of typical activities that these characters are going to be willing to accommodate. Then they have to work things out at (managers are barred in most businesses now from marrying subordinates) and then going public. Followed by marriage. Then it can go anywhere (e.g. adopting a reclusive 12 year old orphan girl). Not sure how long you want to make it but it should have room for a wide variety of situations within the framework of the characters and their further development.
What a great story and I'm sure looking forward to more chapters!
My man that was a beautiful story of a man showing a woman what love is all about sexuality and mentality. U kick ass and can’t wait for chapter two for the ultimate pleasure of making passion luv to Flo.
I loved the story and the buildup to their lovemaking. The ending, however, seemed rather abrupt. I would have liked to have read of their entire lovemaking session rather than read about her orgasm in chapter one and his in chapter two.
Very, very good, and also getting very yummy... Thank you!
Very well written,, I can recommend this to my girlfriend. Thank you
I know because this is the fourth (4th) time reading about Flo and Tom. You sure know hot from cold, high or low side. Everybodys life should be this good. Thank you.