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Author's Note: I hope you enjoyed the first part of the story. Chapter two featuring Ryan and Vicky's Taboo porn debut will be up sometimes next week. I won't give anything away, but will say that where this chapter wasn't too heavy on the taboo action, the next part will more than make up for it. As always, thank you for reading, voting and supporting my work. Lovecraft68
- COMMENTS
Very well done, didn't think I'd make it last the first page or two but glad I did. All of these types of stories are contrived, but I think you did a damn good job justifying it all. Makes for a better story too.
I love your work. And this was a super story. Lookin’ forward to the remainder as the son gets the mother!
An absolute masterpiece of erotica. Totally agree with all of the previous positive comments. See my comments after part 2. Can hardly wait.
No word i can write to describe how well written this story is. Erotica with character development are very rare and you naild it.
you are a magician.
Congratulations on the story. I recommend reading it.
However (Spoiler alert), and I apologize in advance in case I misinterpreted the words of the story, I would like to point out the fact that I was incredulous about the circumstance for which, in the country where the story is set, it is acceptable for a banal mother of a family accompanied by her inexperienced son to go to offices and sustain a heated business discussion concerning explicit sexual actions that they are to perform together.
Concur totally with the previous comment. Beautifully written with superlative character development. Bravo & kudos !! . . . .
Excellent story so far and extremely well told. I love the character build up and mental image of what they're going through as it reads so real. It's too bad the uncle is such an ass, but every good tale has to have its bad guy. It's too bad some of you're commenters can't seem to get past their own personal issues to give a real critique of the writing and plot development, but that's too be expected I suppose. 5/5 from me m and I'll keep my personal thoughts to myself on what I feel would have made it better up to this point.
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I gave this a 4. Preserve judgement. Pretty good writing, but he comes across as such a prick that I don’t care if he gets laid or not. He offers no support to his poor horny mother and her needs-sexual and getting out of the titty bar. In part 2 I hope she fucks the uncle (what she clearly wanted to do) and cucks her son while she fucks the uncle. It would serve the little prick right. Turning down pussy? My god! He should have resolved that issue or shot himself by page 2
This and the following chapter makeup the best story on the Internet. Without a doubt!
I do like how the son is portrayed as being a hard working person to help the family survive after the father's dead. It's also a believable background for making him more mature, respectful, caring and thoughtful than the usual twenty year old young man in most mom-son stories. The situation the family finds itself in seems to be realistic, as far as I can tell, knowing your country from media only.
So, all in all I had fun reading the first part, exept for a few bumps in the road, so to speak. The reasoning mom is giving to keep the house at all cost is not convincing. She has her memories, photos and probably a number of other memorabilia that she can take anywhere, and most of all she has her children.
Another disturbing event is her wanting to visit the brother in law alone, although he even proposes to bring her son along for the meeting. Considering everything about their background I got the impression she wants to fuck that guy, to get the money but also just for the fun of it, using the family's situation as an excuse to absolve herself for wanting to be used by that hunk of a man.
And to be willing to let him have a day with her underage daughters without supervision? NO WAY!
As always, a Lovecraft story is well worth reading. Thank you for this excellent tale of the love between a mother and her son. I am certainly looking forward to the revelations of part 2. If I was a gambling man, I’d have 50c that says the hot action won’t finish after the $60,000 deal. We’ll see. Well worth all of five stars, more if they were available.
Just in passing, this story also highlights the shortcomings of the US health “care” system.
First off, let me just say this story is exactly what Incest Erotica is ALL about.
However I do wish that the rare misspelled words and other errors weren’t there.
With that said, you definitely earn 5 stars on this one ☝️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️
Now, I’m getting ready to read part two. And if my hunch is correct, because of the great storyteller that I know you to be…it’s going to be fucking amazing!!! 😉
Don't let the haters get to you. They only can dream about having the imagination and the ability to write that you do. There are just too many mom-son stories that are so predictable, the same two plots over and over again. It is refreshing to see something different.
Looking forward to part two. I think it is very good. A lot of thought went into this.
I see many people forget that this is a site that has stories written by creative artists. Spelling errors are bound to happen unless proofread by multiple people, I assume that's how it's done. In my opinion that most guys have or had at one time a lustrous thought at one time of either a mother, sister or aunt, I'm sure many will say they haven't... really?
I very much enjoyed it, except for the many spelling mistakes and grammatical errors! You really should get on top of that, as it does tend to detract from the story line.
Excellent story. I'm usually more into the brother / sister angle but this was really good. Looking forward to reading part 2.