by peachtree1958
It has always been my dream to make love to an Indian woman, so you can imagine how your story fired up my imagination.
A really good story and I just hope you write more chapters.
You tell a very nice story. I actually learned something but at the same time, it was very hot. I hope you continue to develop this story.
Great descriptions, build up, imagery.
At the beginning wasn't he a virgin? Now he is an Olympic lover on his first outing?
Its fairly a good story, obviously written by an Indian. But overall its very hot. The start was good leading up to the action part. But it is hardly realistic the things that lead to actual sex. The ladies were too aggressive and seems quite unreal in an Indian context.The settings and seductions would have been more real.
Anyway keep it up. It could involve more situations....shy housewives, friends wives,working girls many seductions, pick ups in different places etc. You may highlight the shyness of women , natural body attributes, like hairy pussies and armpits etc, spicy sweat.
I love Indian women love to have to make love to one they are so sexy mmmmm
It's a good story, obviously written by a White boy. But overall its very hot.