All Comments on 'Neighborly Relations Pt. 00'
by R_D_Eddy
- 8 Comments
This series started out great but as that cast of characters grew the story became too complicated. The difference between stew and slop is what goes into it.
Story started out great with a lot of detail for each scene. Now characters come and go and may only have one brief mention or no mention for each chapter. Melody sounded interesting when first introduced now there are whole chapters with no mention. Also too long between updates
Couldn't you invent some more players? ??!! ... OK, kidding the author! ... Thanks, RD, for your fine work. Maybe the critics have time to show us how to do better? Your stories have been grand, with very few typos, either! Thanks!
Please continue. Ignore the critics. You are doing a fine job. More on Emily Porter please. After all she was the one who started it all off! I was disappointed she has not a bubble butt. Oh well, hopefully she still had a beautiful ass.
even after 16th part you made an effort to keep things in sequence ... many authors dont do it...so well done
Its been ages since you wrote anything on the site and especially this series. That's a shame. I wish you would come back to it. And hope all is well with you.
Your series has been on my top five I have read here. It looks like you planned more for it and either lost interest or could no longer post for some reason.
Thanks for writing as much of it as you did. And hoping some day you will write more.