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All Comments on 'New Life At The Victorian Motel'

by BellaWrites234

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MarsPatrolMarsPatrol10 months ago

Thanks, it was a hot and sexy story.

-Ripley--Ripley-10 months ago

Well done. I wouldn’t have guessed this was your first story. You blend the development of your main character nicely with the steamier aspects of the story. I look forward to your next step in her tale.

timeridertimerider10 months ago

Great start. I like the naïve ones.

maxout09maxout0910 months ago

First off, I'm glad you decided to start writing and see great potential. I loved the story and the plot line however, it felt like it missed a few elements. A better description of the lead you have helped. Also, the sex scene, while well thought out seemed hurried. These are just some helpful tips from a fellow writer and I cannot wait to see what to write next.

CharmlesCharmles10 months ago

You have me... seriously!!!! Your first? Looks like you were born to do this (I'm talking about writing). Please don't take too long to continue! I'm waiting! Damn!!!!!!!

girlhoneygirlhoney10 months ago

Great story, well written, once I started reading I could not stop until the end. I do not write many reviews but felt I just had to say well done, keep writing.

Bencky xx

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Stopped reading when her hair changed colors.

toesucker1toesucker110 months ago

Welcome to Lit! Well done. I liked the irony of a law student unwittingly signing herself into lesbian prostitution. I’m looking forward to what comes next.

Ailsa_CraigAilsa_Craig10 months ago

Soooo good for a first time. Ignore the pettiness of critics and keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

New life at the Vistorian Motel. pt 2 to meet other women

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Please keep this story line active

shuckyducky_quackquackshuckyducky_quackquack10 months ago

Love this! Love your writing!

sharonpalmettosharonpalmetto10 months ago

Very nice!! Look forward to the next chapter!

AliceGeeAliceGee10 months ago

A wonderful opening, very hot and extremely well written. I do hope that there will be more episodes as Cat (Kitty) becomes more experienced in her new life. Five stars for a very worthy first submission.

Saratoga11Saratoga1110 months ago

best new story I've read in forever

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Absolutely loved it.Looking forward to more reading more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very well written. I have so much enjoyed this series as out heroine seeks deeper into her submission. Her journey reminds me so much of my own. I love Cat's relationship with Momma as she grows from scared and defiant to eager and obedient, finding a new purpose to her life. Thank you so much, I very much look forward to more of your stories

LunaDoggyLunaDoggy8 months ago

Utterly superb!

IntoblackIntoblack26 days ago

Damn, that is hot! Keep writing!

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