by ChangeYourPassword
why the fuck didn't Dylan yell for the hospital staff, and doctors as soon as logan told him she had his cock by pasted, and demand it be restored now as he never appoved it to be done to him!! that was illegal without his appoval..
Interesting, like other paradise isle stories. But, like most forced fem stories, the guy just goes along with it. I just don't see it happening like that with a guy that likes women. He's told he's getting tits and doesn't say, "hold the phone Chuck"? Then after that surgery, is told he's getting a surprise and just says go ahead? I don't think so!
This is the first Paradise story I’ve not enjoyed. Logan, as a physician, forcing Dylan to have permanent life-altering non-consensual surgery and ignoring him crying at the loss was a bridge too far. Sorry.
Sorry you’re not into this tale. I warned that the procedure was ‘distasteful’. I picture Dilan as a very submissive sissy, and totally committed to Logan. He’d be unable to resist her questionable actions. They both see it as ‘loving’, in their own view.
I do have several more chapters in the works, for those of you who can accept the story’s premise.
Contrary to the other people I actually really liked this one, but then I also much prefer your other stories that are darker and feature heavier body modifications. To each their own I guess.
Thank you for responding - I was unclear previously: what lost me was that she is a physician who took the Hippocratic oath. If she’d been any other career I’d have liked it more.
One of the only story lines that I disagree with how she cheated him of having an input in what she did to his cock, if he had been informed up front then agreed that would have been ok, but not this way. How can he trust her now? Maybe if she had the doctors reversed the procedure, he could trust her again.
Please go back to PARADISE ISLE - DANNI REMODELED and write another chapter on that story instead, please..
I really have loved all of your other stories, just not this one, but please keep writing..
I understand this tale is more edgy (abusive?) than many of my others. I picture Logan as a strong, accomplished and dominant woman, and Dilan is very much the submissive. Their relationship is based on him always saying ‘yes’. To him, women are to be worshiped.
As to the Danni story, I’m afraid I wouldn’t know where else to take him/her. This Sissy story, is almost too similar (repetitive?) I already feel like I need to write something totally different; once I finish Sissy.
In any case – Thanks again for the feedback.
You don’t know how much we appreciate your comments as the author, in response to our comments. We really do like your writings. But this chapter to this story caught us off guard on Logan bypassing his input about bypassing his/her cock, not on your writings..
I like this story so far. I'm glad I read 'The Beginning' first, it really does set the stage. Dylan seems to be in a 'no way out' situation with Logan. I love that and hope Logan's control over 'her' continues to strengthen :).