by CLiret
I'm usually not a fan of very short stories. I always feel like there were pertinent things left out or serious lack of character development. But this? Holy canopy! You managed to write a beautiful love story that didn't scrimp on the important stuff (well, important to me anyway, lol). God this is a great story and I sincerely hope you will share more! Thank you for this!
You were able to put so much passion and beauty into such a short story, simply amazing. I hope these two are able to overcome the obstacles in their lives to live happily ever after.
I really enjoyed this story, you have a way of making people feel what you've put down in words. I can't wait to read more of your work. Thank you for sharing this with us!
You inspired me, I want to tell my best friend how I feel about her & hope she feels the same about me!
great pacing, great descriptions and a great mix of passion and intensity along with a sincerity that's seldom present in these stories.
Has real potential for an extended series :)
For a first posting it has all the right attributes as it were. The perfect balance of story telling and eroticism.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers