by Eroreader55
Probably my most recurrent fantasy is having a roommate like Maggie. Great story!
I didn't care for the "yes Mistress" part. Blew away the romance for me.
Is there a rule that all male/transexual relationships must devolve ino a dom sub relationship once the pants come off? The previously sweet trans woman turns instantly dominant ,insisting on being called mistress. She proceeds to demean her gentle and kind lover by calling him an ass slut or other nonsense. As for him, he goes from being masculine and cofident to a total sub bottom. Oh and all trans women need to have horse cocks regardless of their height, weight, etc. Also all trans women must be very feminine in all aspects, but when the clothes come off, they magically turn into alpha male pseudo rapists. I dont mind the trans woman being the pitcher and the guy being the catcher but I enjoy when love and respect is maintained throught the story, despite whos fucking whom.
Great story. But, I don't think having her turning dominatrix was necessary. Maybe have her be a little assertive in bed but not completely taking charge. Otherwise the sex scene was great. Loved your description if her cock ;-)
Your description of her apprehension about being 'outted' was excellent! The lead up to the sex scene was great, too. I don't know how he could have cuddled with her for a few afternoons without ravishing her. He must have taken lots of cold showers.
Anyway, please continue the story. Maybe make it really romantic.
5 Stars!
This story started well then fell into that trope of making a transwoman a dominatrix. That is definitely a turn off.
Great story. Really enjoyed the interactions between the characters. While some commenters mentioned turning Maggie into a dominatrix, I think it was just her excitement at being wanted by Tom that really "set her off".
This story got my dick hard so, it did what it was supposed to do. Nice job for only your second posting!
Nice until she got all dominant.
Like so many other similar stories on here it ruined it.
Just why do authors do it ?