All Comments on 'Rough around the Edges Ch. 02'
by Myanlass
- 21 Comments
Jade did need to be taught a lesson... but you left us hanging along with her! lol! Really looking forward to seeing the real Jade and watching James break down all her walls. Thank you for writing!
but thats gonna hurt too!! well done for making James wait for his lady and her total commitment to him.
this is a really great story just like the first. i hope you give us more of these two.keep up the good work!!!
i am really enjoying this series, love the way you set it up and helped to create such a strong feeling between your readers and the characters. cannot wait until you get the next chapter published. and btw this chapter was hot, hot, hot!
Seriously love it! I can't wait to see what comes next cause that move was just too good!
Very good. I can't wait for Jade's wall to fall down. It feels like it's more than we've been told so far. If there's a deeper secret, I hope we learn it soon. The only thing that would make this better is a little editing. There are slight errors (perfect shape woman should perfectly-shaped woman, e.g.) that detract a bit. Overall, though, great stuff.
I love this story, James is such a great guy and a straight shooter, he is always upfront and honest plus the way you describe his hands and kisses are totally hot. The end scene where you have him leaving was perfect, he shouldn't be the one to go on a limb everytime Jade should meet him half way. However, even though I like Jade something is throwing me off about her, I love the fact that she is independent, tough and always in charge (except when it comes to James) cheating on her boyfriend is like the pot calling the kettle black. Yeah, I know Dante is an asshole and doesn't respect her nor deserve her in anyway, shape or form but she shouldn't drop her standards to do the same thing to him two wrongs doesn't make a right, she should break the safetly net with Dante first and hop on James! But great story!!!
If you don't get Jade some sense in that head of hers I'm going to scream. All this justifying to stay with that cheating, lying user, Dante. Ummm why? I just don't understand. And that lovin' that James just put down, is reason enough for her to give Dante his walking papers.
What kind of arrogant basterd would get her off and then think she didn't want him for moving too slow! What was she supposed to do, scream louder or longer. Hes a pompous ass.
Damn, James just stole the ball and scored the winning points!
Dante-who?
Wow. Totally unexpected...James just turned Jade out. This is going to be interesting...
Jade is so damn blind! Dante is at home cheating on you! Good for James for making her wait!
Class is dismissed. I feel like I was just taught a lesson.
I WOULD HAVE SLAP HIM DEAD IF HE DID ME LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have readed this story a dozen times! And with each time I love ❤️ it even more!! Maybe one I will get my James !!!
Okay, so I spoke to soon at the last chapter of the other story. Katrina and Scott are married, and Jade and James will hook up. I knew they would make a very complicated, yet sexy couple. Can't wait to see how this turns out!
I enjoyed Scott and Katrina's story. It was cute and fun to read but Rough around the Edge, James and Jade is where it is at for me. I love Jame's character. He can read all of the people around him and know exactly what they need. He's careful, confident and knows what he wants and doesn't want. Favorite leading man of Lit.