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Click hereMy arms and legs were trembling from the feeling, I wasn't sure how much was from the cold and how much from being nervous, humiliated and seduced. Unless i ran back the other way i was stuck. And going that way would just make me even later... More people might see me and dominate me.
"Ahhhh...s-stop- ahhhh"
"Hehe nice cock loser...man your ass can jiggle..."
"N-no...ohhhhh...d-don't s-stroke...ahh!"
I then cummed...infront of the girls I ejaculated infront of them...they looked wide eyed then laughed.
"Wow...your pathetic!"
The first girl started giggling again, putting her fingers to her mouth. The second girl smiled, looked me in the eyeing me up then back down, and moved to the side. "Guess you'd better get going," she said.
I ran past the girls, getting another slap on my ass along the way making me moan and cum once again.
***
There it was, the end of the park. I could see the street up ahead, the occasional car passing by. I wasn't sure how i was going to cross the street with these cars there. Hitting the button for the walk signal wasn't a good idea- if the cars had to stop at the light, there was no avoiding being seen. Then they were bound to call the cops, if they hadn't been called already.
I slowed as i neared the crosswalk, moving towards the trees. There were some gaps between cars, good. He could hopefully time things well, make a run for it and not be seen. Maybe still beat my fucking sister home-
Her car was already in the driveway.
No! If those fucking girls hadn't of kept me, hadn't of made things so much worse, maybe i would have beaten her! Shit. Now i might be locked out...
I hid behind a tree as i got close to the road. I saw cars pass by occasionally. No one looked in my direction. I was hidden in the dark, away from any lamps, so i should be invisible. And since Bara'a was already home, i might as well wait as long as i needed to for the right time. I could wait all night if I had to...
Looking left and right, i saw cars coming, two on one side and one on the other. And no one behind them. If it stayed that way it could be a good break...
They passed. The roads were clear. I waited three seconds so they'd have some distance, not be able to see me clearly in their rearview mirrors... Still clear.
I dashed from behind the tree, sprinting across the last of the sidewalk path, to the road. I pumped his arms as hard as i could, halfway across the street, trying to go faster, all the way across. Keep going. Almost home. Past the neighbor's house. Most of the lights out in the houses, no porch lights on. Almost there...
I sprinted up the driveway, to the door. The light was out. Thank goodness. I took a second to catch my breath, put my hand back in front of my penis, then tried the door.
It opened.
I stepped inside to my sister, clapping and laughing at me.
"Hooray! You made it! God that is so fucking funny!"
"Shut up," i said, closing the door behind me. "Please, I don't want to hear it."
She laughed again, "did anyone see you?"
"Yes."
"All of you?"
"Shut up," I repeated.
Bara'a kept laughing, "oh yea and uhhh no clothes hehe I was lying! You don't need clothes anymore so I threw them all away! A pet doesn't need clothes!"
"W-what?! N-no! Y-you said- ahhh!!"
She pushed me down with her for stepping on my face and crotch dominating me once again as I moan and cum.
"Shut it bitch! You me my slut now! And tomorrow your licking all my friends feet and we are gonna have fun watching you jack off in front of us. So sleep tight loser."
"Please-"
"I said shut it. Now sleep in the corner over there! I left newspapers to sleep on as well so there you go hehe."
I stay there shocked as my heart sank, I was now a bitch to my sister as she did what ever she wanted with me. For months I was her slut as I was walked around town on a leash made to me fucked by other dogs and played with my anyone who she allowed, I was degraded to her personal slut and I couldn't do anything about it.
- COMMENTS
You not only stole this story but the bits you did write were written horrible. Just give up writing.
There's so much wrong with this, I don't know where to start...
>Switching between 1st and 3rd person
>Sister just abruptly snapping and going psycho on her brother
>No descriptions, no set up, no establishing anything.
>You somehow think a female (how does the MC know that?) would want to suck a man's dick. Have you never actaully seen a dog? Dogs don't do oral, and you're kinda delusional for thinking it.
>Wow, the underling homophobia in this story... You got some issues, dude.
>The girls saying they can't believe someone would throw their brother out naked... Isn't that just you admitting that your own story is pretty bad and you made the sister go psycho as a total plot contrivance because you couldn't think of anything better?
>Cum 20 times in one evening? Between this, the psycho sister, the homophobia, and the FEMALE (so specific) dog engaging in fellatio, I'm starting to think you have a tenuous grasp on reality...
>Did you really steal this story and repost it with some VERY badly added parts? WTF?
You need to stick to 1st person
You need to flesh out ideas more with more details like what do the guys look like from what you can make out, short or tall, thin or muscular, describe their cocks, and what you feel. If you aren't gay then getting entered is really going to hurt.
How about leave out the dog being female and somehow screwing you and have it keep shoving its nose up your butt and licking you driving you to distraction. Maybe it trying to mount you and you push it off and you backing up to a sapling or something.
I don't care if you are 19 you can't cum every 3 minutes. Have the dog get you rock hard and maybe the guys build you to orgasm and then struggle to get off for the girls. Also, who pays for everything that you and your sister are living alone and think through the coming attractions. She obviously can't walk him around town naked on a leash and have dogs fuck him in public. Maybe their parents were killed in a car accident and they inherited a great deal of money. She sells the house and all of his and his parents stuff and buys a nice place in the country (isolated, but just a few miles out so her friends etc can visit). He is kept naked or in women's clothes when she wants. Her friends can bring their males dogs to visit her 'bitch'. She decides he is ejaculating too much and orders some toys a chastity with catheter with screw in cap so she can control his urination if she wants, butt plug tail, black leather jock, muzzle/mask, o ring gag, collar, leash, knee pads that keep the knees bent, paw gloves for the hands. He would definitely raise eyebrows but could legally be taken for a walk with his muzzle, jock, tail, paws, kneepads, collar, and leash (the jock might have to be exchanged for shorts with a hole for the tail. EIther way extremely humiliating . At home possibly the muzzle/dog head exchanged for the o-ring so things can be inserted into his mouth and the shorts/jock removed so only tail and chastity. Of course with the paws on his hands the chastity might be removed to tease him as he won't be able to wank etc.
He jumps back and forth between 1st and 3rd person because this author stole this story from someone else and inserted new material throughout it, then reposted it as his own work.
The parts that are actually written with correct English are the original parts. The parts that don't make sense were added by this guy!