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- Slave Girl Emily Ch. 02
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by Serafina1210
- 13 Comments
I think that's the nicest comment I've ever gotten on a story.
This was the best chapter so far, and also much happier! I hope you continue! To the anon who thinks ownership of another human being is sickening- you realize it's a consensual relationship right? If someone wants to be "owned" and controlled in a consensual context then who are you to tell them otherwise? Anyway, this is an excellent story so far and seems to be getting better.
How little it takes sometimes to create balance. Those quick and quiet checks to be sure she is okay and to reassure her are golden. So many authors forget or choose not to include these things mistakenly thinking they detract from the intensity. IMO acknowledging care and concern allows increasing intensity. I hope that even as Emily seeks 'more,' that Master (and you) do not loose sight of that factor.
Excellent story, Would have liked, when slave was in frame, to be left there, to be viewed and displayed in front of all, for awhile. I like to be shamed, embarrassed and humiliated.
Can't wait until the next installment ....
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Your writing is wonderfully simple and yet I can completely picture everything and sense everything! Looking forward to reading the next installment, but I had to comment before I went on:) definitely 5*****
It's rare to read a story that is both loving and still in tune with the volatile bdsm dynamics of control and humiliation and so on. Normally writers end up writing to extremes. Great writing!
I never thought about this approach of relationship, but kudos on bringing such a juxtaposed main character to life: submissive, yet assertive. I'm jealous of Emily, she's so brave, and knows what she wants. :3
this is the best story so far that i have read in a long time. i hope to see more stories.