- Fetish
- Something Has Come Up
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All Comments on 'Something Has Come Up'
by EmilyMiller
- 27 Comments
Nice story, but I could have done without the addition of a male character.
it’s nice that you read and comment on so much of my stuff. Thank you! Em
- it was an idea conceived between me, a Lit guy and another Lit chick. It was always going to feature all three of us. Apologies that this part of the dynamic was not to your taste. Em
This is incredibly written, liked the threesome aspect of it as well and could tell it was a collaborative idea which was really cute!
This story takes fantasy to the extreme. Inventive, creative and very well written, but the level of implausibility made it difficult for me to really get into it. I preferred The Big Stretch, where though not nearly as evocative, I found the realism much more captivating.
's it’s pure fantasy. It’s not meant to be plausible: anatomically or in any other respect. Glad you found the writing good. Em
thank you. Yes very much written with each of the protagonists in mind. Em
Fantastic. One of my all-time favorite stories on here for sure! Really liked the playfulness of the characters within; seems like you lot have a great deal of fun together and that totally came through in the story.
Thank you. Yes it was entirely reflective of the actual people involved. As I always say, I’m not that creative! Em
Really liked this, different than what I usually read but was a lot of fun.
- different to what I normally write as well, but I enjoyed playing with the genre. Glad you liked it. Em
A delightfully whimsical little fantasy. Never read much on Futanari, but enjoyed the concept. May have to look up some anami or something lol
- thanks for the encouraging feedback and glad you found stuff to like in it 😊. Em
And they say conversion therapy doesn't work! Or was it exposure therapy? Whatever it was, it worked on me!
- I guess it’s my purest stroke story. At least if you just count ones over two thousand words. Em
Unsure and amazed at how I never recognized this story before, but now I have, and it’s an all time favorite fantasy tale. 👏🏼 😍 😈
The anime lover in me thoroughly enjoyed this story of pure luxure.
Something about women also having a male appendage is just so darn sexily hot!
- it’s a nice fantasy. I don’t think I’d like a cock full time, but being able to grow one on demand like my she-demons would be cool 😎
This could be the most intense sexual scene I have ever read. Non stop climaxes from beginning to end. I have read about transexuals and hermaphrodites also known as gynandrous. Never read a story like this. As a dream sequence experienced by both women and explained in the final paragraphs, I was ready to believe the reality of the situation with Dylan. I have often wondered how I would like to have a vagina to play with all my own.
with the possible exception of my Cressie stories, it’s probably the most full on thing I have written. Emily