All Comments on 'Sun-hi'

I loved the way the story developed. There wasn't anything cliche about this except the Shining knight coming to the rescue part. But even that was done tastefully. It wasn't a rescue then an immediate fuck. If you want the quick release this story is not for you. Please keep up the work. I'm going back to read your other stories.

I loved your story about Sun-hi and Tad. It was both an old-fashion Love Story and a highly Erotic Tale at the same time. Romantic and Well Written.

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Let's just say I love your style and everything. Third story that I have read of yours tonight. Slow and great development of love between 2 people. Fantastic.

... but the dialog is so stilted I feel like I'm reading about robot romance.