All Comments on 'The Catch-Up Ch. 06'
by starcall
- 33 Comments
starcall just keeps producing such amazing work! 👏
Once again, this was much better than what i thought would be how the next person was added to AJs list 👌
That was hot! In every which way!
Right now, I'm enjoying all the storylines actually. The switch between friends and popular girls works pretty well for me. If you're doing milestones, then I'm guessing sex at the workplace will also figure in at some point. Ice cream and sex!
Reminds me a lot of the second chapter, which is good. It was the first chapter I read and still my favorite. Please keep up the good work! Also Team Mackenzie!
Decent chapter but wish it was longer. So guess that means we need chapter 7 and make it snappy lol. More bridget also
The previous chapters set the standard but I'm not sure this one is quite up there. What I look forward to in your writing is the story development and the fun you have with unusual characters but this was more run of the mill super hot girl fucks hung stud over and over. I still liked it, just not as much.
This is honestly one of the best ongoing stories on literotica in my opinion. Very competently written, with a loose but engaging slice-of-life plot thread. It also nails a “harem-ish” theme without being too heavy handed about it. None of the events thus far seem too far-fetched (although they obviously ride the line, as does most erotica) and the cast of characters are all diverse and likable. I’m already hoping we can follow to AJ to college or something, just let the good times keep rolling!
Really awesome work, 5 stars for sure! Keep writing, you have a real talent for it!!
Honestly I know the comments are saying it wasn’t long enough but I think that its setting up chapter 7. Starcall really is the GOAT out here!
I liked this one a lot! The back and forth between Mackenzie and Gigi was really fun and it’s nice that Gigi didn’t take offense to finding out. Her scene was extremely hot, great job!
I really like how you’re able to differentiate all the girls, their personalities are varied and the sex scenes are vastly different, none of them feel samey. I really hope AJ can get with the ice cream girl and the Mormon soccer player, those scenes would be cool to see!
Thank you so much! This was awesome! :)
Love this part.. really kinda still hoping Dylan makes an appearance. That would be hot
Continuing to really enjoy this series--and I'd really like to see AJ and Bridget keep developing their thing.
Great story. Love the writing, the conflict, the sexiness. Kudos.
First off I have really enjoyed this story so far. Secondly Saddie is by far my favorite character and I hope she is in as many chapters as possible, I know they don't want to be in a dating relationship but it would be cool if her and AJ ended up confessing their love for each other in the final chapter whenever that may be. Keep up the great work!
Great story. Looking forward to the next installment. Sadie is great and I love the interplay between the Pom girls. Seems like Kiera might have a thing for AJ...?
PLEASE DROP CHAPTER 7 I CANT WAIT A MONTH EVERY TIME
Love it. So hot. Would love to see Reagan and Faith reenter the picture.
Just wanted to let you know that I love you writing style. You have good cadence and you construct well though out dialog.
I hope you continue to write.
I started with you in chapter 1 and have been reading every chapter as soon as you posted a new one
Your content is really good so please continue writing this masterpiece
I couldn't help but think (or is it hope!) that the way this chapter ended that maybe there's a possibility for a three-way between AJ, Gigi, and Mackenzie. Maybe it's just wishful thinking on my part, but I see a lot of reasons for this part of the story heading in that direction.
First of all, Mackenzie obviously has a strong obsession for AJ and does not want to give him up. Perhaps AJ could use this to his advantage and convince her for a three-way? Or maybe some sort of a competition that turns into a three-way.
This leads to my second point that there is definitely some natural competition between Mackenzie and Gigi, so maybe if one of the girls gave AJ an ultimatum, maybe AJ could say it's too tough to decide between the two, and playfully suggest a novel way to come to a decision.
Thirdly, Gigi and Makenzie are physical opposites and opposites do tend to have great attraction. Perhaps while they're competing to see who can give AJ the best blow job, Gigi and Mackenzie "accidentally" kiss each other while sucking on AJ's dick and then things happily escalate from there!
Fourthly, as the quiet, but liked-by-all nerd, AJ seems to have this wonderful ability to make people, particularly girls, feel comfortable around him. I think that because AJ is such a non-threatening type of guy, maybe, just maybe, the girls would feel comfortable enough to do this.
Here's to hoping!
I was thinking about this story line last night. I hope you keep Bridget close in the story as a confidant that shares AJ’s same lusts. I like their relationship as long as they do not make love. This entire story is a fun read and is nicely written! Thank You for sharing this story.
Wwwooo...MacKenzie, then Gigi...fucked both of them up, and in such true stud fashion!!!! They BOTH deserve him, just like all the other girls do!! As to a threesome with all participating...meh, maybe...is a good fantasy.
I would really rather prefer to see Bridget and AJ finally get TOGETHER, Bridget deciding that she likes AJ's cock, and no other, in her life. If there is a threesome to come, Bridget and one of her crushes...
Again, I am really enjoying this series...it flows...it is nasty, yet the people involved care about each other, even if they treat each other in a "kinda iffy" manner.
Five**5**Stars, Oh, Yes...very well-deserved...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌠🌋🌞🌞🌞🌞🌞💯
Sadie...that is who AJ should have the threesome with...Sadie and Bridget...his really good friends...who better to share with, but those three. Emotional attachment is there, and they have 'shared' about and with each other...THIS is my vote for a threesome...Remains to be seen, in remaining chapters!!💥💥💥💫💫🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
I've been rereading this series, and have to say that it would be amazing on film. Seriously, I don't know why porn directors aren't coming here to look for great plots and amazing sex.