by Clarence_Poindexter
Good plot, very well written, but the ending was, well, meh. Would like to see more works. Cheers.
A bit brief but a fun romp none the less. Looking forward to more stories from you.
It does seem more than a little bizarre that Helen was the only one to be affected and her pleas of “wait” and “stop” wouldn’t happen.
I had the opportunity to try to be hypnotized and I pretended because I didn’t want the hypnotist to look bad and honestly, thought it was a joke...until he took a girl, who weighed 100 lbs soaking wet, made her lie with her head on one chair, her feel on another chair and she was a stiff as a board. Then he stood on her and SHE DIDNT MOVE!
But in all this, the other participants didn’t object. They couldn’t because they were in a trance so there is no fucking way Helen would have been able to object. And the hypnotist wouldn’t have allowed the crowd to control the scene. That isn’t a performance, that would be a lawsuit waiting to happen.