All Comments on 'The Monster under The Bed'

PLEASE OH MY GOD WRITE MORE

More!

Ohhh god...best story i have ever read...want a sequel..may be Laura becomes a bride or something and monster breeds her.

Terrific story, would love a sequel where the monster now breeds her. Definitely following this author now haha

I must say I'm not a fan of very long stories in here, but this one... I didn't skip anything. The way you make dialogues is really good. Praise to you writer! I hope you write a sequel! :D

This was absolutely incredible.

". . .every little kid thinks there's a monster under their bed!"

"But you happened to be right."

That was the first time I shivered when reading this. It was not the last. This is truly one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I can't imagine a more perfect erotic horror piece. Well done.

Don’t you wish there really was tentacle monsters? I DO❤️

wish I was Laura fr ✊

Shit i love this one .need a monster under my bed too now

Very well done! I appreciated that you thought of how Laura would need to get used to anal before feeling good with it, and the detail about getting throat fucked but still being able to breathe (why not if shes already fucked by an inter dimensional tentacle monster?). It also had some fantastic true horror elements: endless appendages, mysterious location, and being completely covered by tentacles. I really enjoyed this and hope you'll keep sharing!

Nice. Very creative

I hated how you called it "channel" multiple times. But it's nice to know that dogs can detect the Underbed Dwellers. Not that I would recommend this to any girl to rob her of the experience!

There needs to be a part 2 to this

I wrote my own story since he won’t release a part 2

Hot!!;;

Wow. This is fantasy fuel for the ages.

Holy fuck man where is the next part like common

I can’t believe this never got a part 2

This is an all time favorite! I can’t tell you how many times I’ve read it! Still hoping for a part 2 some day!!