All Comments on 'The Neighbour Experiment!'

A pleasant change.

This is truly a painful read. It boggles the imagination that a man could meet another guy who just moved in next door and proceed to answer everything that he is asked about! Am I alone here? If some forward jerk, out of the blue, ask to see my house, starts asking intimate questions about my wife and her clothing? Then it's boom, out the door mac! Your visit is over and don't ever speak to my wife or knock on our door again! Then the hunt starts on the new residence!

Intriguing. I loved the story line and even the surprise ending was fun, altho not so sexy.

But, seriously, you should engage the help of a volunteer editor/proofreader. There were scores of gaffs, including multiple cases where you got the gender wrong of a person you were talking to or about. I would be honored to serve that role for an exciting writer like you. Keep 'em coming.

It really is the acme of stupidity to risk a life together for a few hours of sex.

A loving wife and a not so loving husband...Will she lose the respect she had for her husband? If so, this marriage is doomed...2*

Great story! I’m looking forward to another chapter where things will develop in another direction for Anna….

Any story that involves a husband handing his wife over to some guy is an automatic 1. IRL, any woman but a slut would feel devalued and insecure if a husband did what this character did (or what you see in the "hotwife" and cuck stories). Wives who love their husbands want to feel special, protected, and possessed by their husbands. "Swinging" and being handed off does cause them to lose respect for their husbands and to feel less connected. They might stay in the marriage, but they'll never see their husbands the same way.

Get an editor and study up on your pronouns. It is apparent English isnt your first language and you do fairly well, but the pronoun gender mistakes breaks the flow of an otherwise ,shall we say, interesting premise.

Never take a dump where you live. Ridiculous.

Boy that make you go soft in a hurry nearly being puked on , lol ! She should have puked the neighbor was an asshole anyway and a huge blob of puke all over his dick and balls would have been a big step up for him !

That was a silly mess, but naturally, Odiouser likes it.

Why would Anna ring the doorbell to her own apartment? Who thinks used panties are intoxicating? It’s sweaty vag, piss and shit, do you smell your used shorts and think how wonderful they smell?

This was a fucking disaster from the start.

Why would a wife have to keep ringing the doorbell to get into her own apartment? Too weird!

No.

i liked it, and i wish Anna would have made out with jullie and both of them sucked Boyd, maybe Tom would have watched Anna get some real variety of cock.