- NonConsent/Reluctance
- The Nod
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All Comments on 'The Nod'
by JPie00
- 61 Comments
The story started off so good. This was absolutely hot and steamy. I want you to explore more on their dynamic. Like make it absolutely dirty but please don't add any third person and just don't let it be just an ordinary story of nasty sex. Like explore more of the non con genre and the fight with their emotional turmoil and still submitting themself both into this lusty adventure. I want more and more of this story please. Hoping to see part 2 and more
This story made me nervous...if I thought it was just a story then it's great but if this really happened. Thats very sad that you didn't have a dad that you could feel safe with. You physically enjoyed the sex doesn't mean you were at fault. I have a story like this but its my uncle.
This totally sucks. Where am I going to get clean nether clothing this time of the morning?
Oh drat, that was good.
Thank you everyone who took the time to read my first writing. Reading back through it myself I’ve caught some silly grammatical errors as well as some things I felt I may have rushed through.
After the MOSTLY positive feedback I’ve decided to start the next chapter and hope to have it done in a week or so. I kind of rushed through this first one as I was excited to submit my story. For part 2 I plan to take my time to minimize my mistakes and provide the depth and detail to make it more enjoyable to you.
Umm how long will you take to upload the part 2!? You said withing a week, it's already been more than a week. The anticipation is killing me :(((((
With as long as it’s taken, part 2 is either a masterpiece or you must be doing part 2 , 3&4
One of the hottest stories on Literotica.
Dear author, can you just come up with the part 2 already! Like the second week is running, how much longer will it take? 😑
Good story, a few grammatical errors but didn't take away from the story. Although I forgot that it was a true story. Definitely want a Part 2. Would like to hear the father explain that he knew about the mother and let her know that he had been monitoring her internet usage.
Dear god that was HOT!
And for your first ever story too,you are talented I freaking love it...
Wow. So intense. So real. So well done. So shamefully, powerfully arousing. More please. Please!
So was the pressure of follow this up too much for you? A shame that this story seems to have been abandoned.
Well done. A worthy first chapter if the only one that ever gets published
Very hot! I look forward to a Ch 2, in the shower, and a Ch 3 with blowjob and anal. They have a lot of weekend left to fill before mom gets home.
It's been 5 months and the author says she has this and that problem, then they goes on to say they are gonna use editors and still hasn't managed to update a part 2 of this potentially magnificent work. What a shame to see the anticipation of what happens next fade away with each month passing. Dear authoe, you could have said that you don't want to continue writing this story instead of giving us meaningless hope to wait for an eternity
It's been 5 months and the author says she has this and that problem, then they goes on to say they are gonna use editors and still hasn't managed to update a part 2 of this potentially magnificent work. What a shame to see the anticipation of what happens next fade away with each month passing. Dear authoe, you could have said that you don't want to continue writing this story instead of giving us meaningless hope to wait for an eternity
Flower girl, I sincerely apologize for taking so long and I genuinely am flattered you enjoyed it enough to check back for the next part. I never thought this would be so popular, and I’ve never meant to string anyone along. Making sure the next part is something that won’t disappoint you is my biggest worry, and I do have a busy personal life as well that takes away from writing. I’m sorry!!!!
Dear author, i am sorry for reacting harshly. I know you have a busy personal life and you are not entitled to give anyone any answer on why the story was delayed. I must have been frudtrated back then when i wrote the comment. I am really sorry, i should have been more mindful of my words. Peace 🙂
It’s been 8 months since this was posted and a while since the last update.
What gives? Will there ever be a part two?
After receiving a lot of harsh and rude private emails I had backed off of writing more of this, and even reading Literotica in general. The plan at this point is to try to release a "Remastered" version of this story in the next few weeks which includes some badly needed spelling and grammatical fixes, some better details to the original story, as well as adding a "the day after" of the original story. After that, I think that will finish how far I'm willing to take "The Nod."
Please create more stories. I'm very excited for your future stories. Your way of writing and narrating is very engaging.
I'm curious what happened next? Were you caught doing the act? What happens to the mom and her significant "other"? So many questions!
I’m gonna say, I’ve never commented on a story here before, but this one was so well written that I had to. The subject matter is not easy, especially since I experienced something similar as a kid. It’s a terrible world but something about this was so healing for me and I look forward to more
Will there be a part 2? It will be a crime to abandon this story in between...
Will there be a part 2? It will be a crime to abandon this story in between...
It’s been a while, but still hoping you’ll come back with part two of this story. I’m guessing gets more consensual. Keen to find out.