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Click here"Oh oh OHHH..Ah Ah AAAHHHHH..., I think I may cum again. Oh yes, YES I'm cumming again!" Sara's screams filled the entire house.
Mark drove deep within her and stopped to feel her inner pussy muscles milk his dick as waves of her mind blasting orgasm ravaged her. Mark couldn't hold out any longer when Sara's pussy started milking his seed from his cock.
Mark stopped; as her cunt contracted tight around his cock he shoved it into her as deep as he could. Mark embraced Sara tightly, crushing her small tits to his hairy chest and shot load after load of cum inside her tiny little cunt. Sara felt his cock spurting stream after stream of cum inside her baby channel and it brought her to another orgasm. Sara felt a mixture of Mark's and her cum oozed out from her and dripping to the bed sheets over the crack of her ass.
Sara couldn't fathom how long their simultaneous orgasm lasted, but he finally pulled out for fear of crushing her dainty little body and lay down next to each other, panting in each other's arms.
"Oh you little slut, I knew your pussy was going to be good. You are so tight. I came so hard. Sara gazed at his softening cock and noticed a remaining thick white string of cum dribbling onto her bedcovers.
"Don't tell me Mark! I loved it too," Sara smiled innocently.
- COMMENTS
Liked it. Keep on writing. There are too many mistakes. past tense or present? Make up your mind! But overall you have a good story line that could have had more detail in the parts not about sex, though that's just because I like more of a story than this provides.Keep writing. Also don't write about things you don't understand. The cock can't get half way in before meeting the hymen.
Definitely a good story, but needs to be revised. It reads as though the author speaks English as a second language. A lot of the phrases sounded unnatural and forced. I like the concept, but the writing was a little distracting. Also, like so many people, I don't think the author understands where they hymen is, or the concept of "popping one's cherry".
. . . that could have been better executed. In addition to the previous comment about grammar and tenses, which I agree with, I'd suggest you read some of your dialogue out loud. The stilted dialogue was distracting. Make the characters talk like real people do. But I like your potential, so I hope you will keep writing. I'm a big fan of "mature" stories.
Pleeease write more on this. I want the same experiance that Sara had. More I read the story more I get horny. I know that this kind of things happenning everywhere and my only hope is to play Sara's roll one day. Thanks slnaughtygirl, I think this is your personal experiance? Isn't it?
write more she has to have more if he fucked her aunt she needs lots more even some anal
This might have been a better read with some correct grammar. Past tense, present tense, where are we? Oh, and by the way, Google "hymen" and find out where a woman's "cherry" is really located.