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Click here"Money doesn't buy happiness, Sir." She said. "Money only buys more expensive problems."
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John stood in his living room while he dialed his son's number. He was standing in front of the mantle staring at a photo of Tom and him at the Pinewood Derby race for Boy Scouts. He remembered how proud his son had been. He insisted on making the car himself from the small kit. John tried to oversee it while his son had carved the wood block and painted the racing stripes on its side. As he looked at the picture he felt an awful pang of guilt. He listened to the phone ring until his son had finally answered.
Tom had been disturbed by the familiar ringtone, which pulled him out of his reverie with Alexis. He saw the number come up on his screen, and he walked a small distance away as if the distance would protect her or him from some uncomfortable reality.
"Hello?" he said as he answered the phone.
"Hi, Tom, it's dad." The tone wasn't contentious or malicious. Tom just thought it sounded sad and perhaps pathetic.
"Hi. I'm glad you called." Tom replied.
"Yeah. I was just... um... well you said that you were going to talk to your mother..."
"Look, dad," Tom said. "She's agreed to sit down and talk with you in person."
"That's good news." His father stated.
"There are a few conditions."
"Conditions?" The ire in John's voice began to rise as he tried to control his temper. "She's giving me conditions? Just to have a fucking conversation?"
Tom tried to catch him before he said something stupid. For a moment, Tom thought that maybe his father was getting to a point where he could be rational.
"Before you lose it, just listen to me. She wants to meet you in person, not on the phone."
This didn't sound so bad to John. "Alright. What else?"
"She wants you to come out to Los Angeles. The thought of going home is very emotional for her. I honestly think it benefits you."
"Are you kidding?!" He complained. "I have to drop everything to fly out there? I have a job!"
"There's more." Tom said. "She wants me to be present."
"Absolutely not!" John had lost control of his anger. "I'm not airing my fucking laundry in front of you. This is ridiculous. She's being ridiculous."
"Look, dad, whether you think she's being ridiculous or not, she watched you fucking a masseuse and then listened to you lie about it. All judgment aside from me, she's not exactly dying to sit down with you. It was hard enough to get her to agree to this. Just fly out. You can be in and out in a day if time's an issue. But trust me, if you don't come out then it's going to be strictly lawyers."
His anger boiled over. "I will not be held hostage by her inability to talk to me. If I fly out there then it'll just be so I can see the look on her face when I tell her to fuck off."
"That's up to you. She asked me to be there. I said yes. You can say whatever you want to her."
"Of course you said you'd be there for her. She's trying to get everyone to pick sides. Fine." He blurted. "I'll be there as soon as possible. I'll let you know when I get a fucking ticket."
John hung up the phone, and stomped into the kitchen grabbing a beer from the fridge before angrily popping the cap. Nothing was working out in his favor lately, he thought. He couldn't fuck Angie. He couldn't fuck his wife. He couldn't even muster an iota of respect from anyone. John Bolden was mad at the world.
He picked up the phone and called his son again. He was damned sure not going to get walked over by everyone. He waited for Tom to answer the phone, and then he launched into a tirade saying just how he felt.
"You know what?" He said "I'll be out there on Monday. I don't know what the fuck your mother is thinking. How long is she going to sleep on your couch in your little apartment? At what point is she going to have to come back home and live her life? Huh? I fucked someone else, okay? Big deal. So, what's she going to do? Throw away our marriage? You know I wouldn't have had to fuck anyone else if she wasn't such a prude. I've worked my whole life to support you and her. I've gone to work every day building a retirement so one day I could stop working and live the life I wanted. I'm not letting her take it from me. If she wants to move on with her life then fine, but she can't have a penny. No one is gonna want a middle-aged woman that doesn't put out. So I'll be there on Monday, and she can tell me whatever she wants. Then I'll look her in the face and tell her how worthless she is."
He hung up again feeling better that he had gotten it out of system. He wasn't sure why he had felt bad for his son. The kid was thirty years old. He wasn't responsible for him anymore. As far as John was concerned, his son was just prolonging this whole fiasco by giving his mother safe harbor. Well that wasn't going to be the case for much longer. John was going to tell her just where she could shove her divorce proceedings.
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"What happened?" Alexis asked looking up from the blanket.
"He's coming out." Tom said. "He'll be here on Monday. You know for a second, I thought he sounded like the man I remembered. He almost sounded remorseful. He's gotten so angry. I was hoping we could just sit and be rational, but he wants conflict. It's like he needs it or something."
"What are you going to do, Sir?" Alexis asked concerned.
"I'm going to give it to him, Lexi." Tom replied.
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To be continued...
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- COMMENTS
This is my second time thru and this is brilliant. Words can't match what you've written here.
WOW.....just WOW! Best so far! Literally had tears when Alexis opened up to Tom under the tree! Superbly written! 5⭐
A good story, but tell me, what son, even a Dom fucking his own mother whores her out to other men and women for his own entertainment.
Tom is a asshole, a complete asshole to his mother. In a way, he has taken complete advantage of her fragile being.
She needed his love and support in a traumatic time in her life, NOT never ending fucking.
She is confused as to who she is now and has fallen prey to her novel led fantasies.
Soon his Aunt will be next, then what, Tom fucking his Mother and her sister and the sisters fucking each other???
One thing l do know with certainty, incest does not share, never, ever!!!
It is a fact of the relationship check it out yourselves, written proof is out there.
Unfortunately, authors who have never been in such a relationship, write drivel about matters they know nothing about.
Tom is the one who needs to be horsewhipped, for what he has done to his family.
He is a cunt to his mother, a real sadistic cunt.
This episode 2/5
And Sir Author,
FIVE STARS☆☆☆☆☆
Holy Smokes...
So Many Super Highlights
This caught my attention:
He couldn't see the smile that stretched across her face after hearing his words. He felt her body tense in anticipation at the word 'marry'. She nudged her elbow lightly into his side, and continued.
"He's not perfect, momma. Sometimes he snores. Sometimes he interrupts people. Sometimes no matter how intuitive he is with other people, he can't see his own emotions." Tom admired her in this very real moment. "But there's one more thing, momma. You... you said that the only two things you looked forward to were meeting the man who stole my heart and being a grandma. You're going to be a grandma... to a baby boy." She turned with tearful, scared and happy eyes. "You're going to be a father, Sir. I'm sorry I've been trying to find a way to tell you."
"A little boy?!" He said overwhelmed, and unsure he heard her correctly. "I'm going to be a father?"
"Yes, Sir."
"Oh my God! Alexis! Oh my God!" He pulled her up and lifted her into the air spinning her around. "Oh, he's going to be brilliant. I'm going to be an amazing father and you'll be an amazing mother. I love you so much. How long have you known?"
Not very often one can write about he sex and kink, and still write a moment like you did in the vineyard.
So truly very good
But all the hype you gave to how Marie was the only woman who could be as special as Lexi, as strong as Tom on the inside and bla bla bla, made the sharing with his lawyer friend seem horrible and very cheap...
Hated that part in an otherwise good story.
I can get that the incest is irrelevant, because it's all about the submission, but I think you're scattering between what you think Tom should act like and the sex scenes you want to write... Feels like two different people at times.
but WOW
man... what a story... I should sleep.. I really should... but you know what.. I am going to read ch. 5 fuck it... I just read it and weep in the morning cause my lack of sleep
And YOU SIR
you are responsible
I'll have my boss call you... because... fuck... this story is to great... it is all your fault
Forgive my english and my french
FUCK this story is great
You really know how to make your readers into sponges.
I just can soak up enough of your story, once it get a hold on you there is no going back you are in for the long haul.
I love when a righter can make you feel like you are part of the story to the point you can see every thing going on in your mind like you are standing there watching it take place.
I knew it! Part 3 page 2, I knew she was pregnant! I am getting none of my work completed however, I am reading your story! Thank you, I Love it so far!
Having Alexis state her love and the emotional trip they took, almost brought a tear to my eyes, great work!
It is well written, the story line is fascinating, the pace is fast. I forgot, it is freaking hot ..did I say that?
I've submitted part five, which should be up in a few days. Thanks again for all the great feedback. I hope I don't let anyone down with the next installment.
I find the characters amazingly well defined and I like that without extensive descriptions of how they look, you have impressed strong clear images of them. The different story lines blend in and I am not getting bored with any of the aspects. Plus each chapter is nice and long to give us famished readers enough to munch on.
If Culture Shock is the intro to the BDSM mentality, the Novelist complements that story with all the naughty delicious activities your caharacters take part in. I found it interesting that you changed the category of the story to Incest, when all the while for me the central theme is BDSM in the context of which all other types of sex are taking place.
Hope you can continue writing and rule the Halls of Fame!
I'm almost wincing in anticipation of the showdown. The father has been portrayed in draconian terms. Apparently he wasn't always a buffoon or bully but ' something ' has changed. Excellent job in terms of giving all the subs,their own separate identities. I'm fascinated by how things change with a child and the aunt's arrival.
The author has set himself quite a task with next entry in series, with all multi- faceted issues at hand. Orgasms and complications galore.
Very impressive! I have spent the past 3 evenings reading to this point. Most I would have tried to read in one night but I was savoring the story and wanted to make it last. My only disapointment now is not being able read chapter 5 yet. Your writing skills are incredible. The story line is great and very believible. I have to hand it to you on an excellant work in progress. It deserves to be published and as with Tom, I'm sure it would make the best seller list! This could give 50 Shades of Grey a run for the money!
Oh man, this last chapter's ending was brutal! What a cliffhanger! Amazing read, incredible story, impeccably written. It's a tossup between caring about the story and caring about the sex, they're balanced so nicely. Keep it up sir/ma'am, you're a damn good writer.
This just keeps on keeping me glued to the page (or screen). The key is characters who keep discovering things about themselves. Can't wait for what comes next. By the way, while I could see Alexis's pregnancy coming, I found the scene in the vineyard a great setting for her telling Tom.
I just finished reading all 4 chapters 1 after the other. I couldn't stop. This is my favorite story line of Mother Son incest but it is the STORY that is just as facinating. It is like somthing I would have found onlinestories.net. I hope that you have SEVERAL more chapeters. Please keep up the great work.
This tale continues to get better with every chapter - how the fuck is that possible? The man's a fucking genius! Seriously, got to be one of my all-time favourite series ever. I particularly liked the bench that Tom's mother Marie was strapped to and then 'machine fucked' to oblivion! This guy knows how to treat his sluts!! I hope chapter 5 isn't going to be long in coming.
After reading Pt. 3, I was left without much to say. It wasn't that I didn't enjoy it, but it was hard to elaborate on what aspects of it I enjoyed. To me, the most important element of any writing is if it is able to connect with me in some way. Part 3, I was lacking that. But, as I started reading Part 4, I enjoyed it from the start.
Part 2 was my favorite up to this point, but I think Part 4 has taken its place now. I find Tom to be a very credible character, and his encounters to be things I believe could happen in reality. I liked that there was a mix of both sexually explicit scenes as well as emotionally raw.
Since I won't give any spoilers away, what happens to Alexis brought me to tears. I was glad to see that Tom finally secured happiness in his life. It was nice to see that Alexis was not just a submissive to Tom, but how loyal she is. The other women in the story, although I thought at first it was a bit much - might pull together the story for a reader. There's traits in each of these women I think most people can find they identify with in some way. I know a few of them I still sit on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen to them, seeing as I think I relate to them more than the others. A few of them I've grown dispassionate towards.
You've done a great job once again, Sir. Can't wait for Part 5.
Continue like this. Your story is awesome.
I just hope his dad gets nothing and Tom ends up with his mother and aunt living with him.