- Loving Wives
- The Visitor
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Click hereAll too late.
And in that moment—if someone else had asked how I felt, I'd answer the same way. It felt like a tsunami, and I had sunk under the water. I had been lost in the debris, unable to surface. I had practically run towards the tsunami, even. That was the most unexpected part.
And I was gone.
- COMMENTS
It's sort of difficult to believe that author is a woman. She consistently paints women as pathetic creatures
This author presents vulnerability so well that dozens of readers are compelled to defend her...against attacks that are, logically speaking, similar to lemmings disappearing beneath the waves. More better to conserve one's energy for marveling.
Seems like Tom just exposed two cheating worthless cunts to each other. Two horrible people married to each other on a crash course headed towards failure. All Tom did was bring the failure faster.
Again...unlikeable characters. This author is really good at writing people I would hate and avoid in real life.
Sounds like Jack was a complete cunt. She was lucky to find out and be given a simple exit from her mistake
Great short story. Tom.got revenge and destroyed their marriage. Regardless of what Jack did (or did not do) to Tom in the past, Jack's wife betrayed and him and there is no going back.
Powerfully written. Unlike other reviewers, I don't feel the need to have everything answered or over-explained. That's not how real life is, and rarely is it a mark of good writing. You write well, it just happens to be your subject is erotica. :)
i don't understand
If Tom was right then Jack deserved it. Everyone deserves to have a taste of their own medicine
Another excellently written story without an ending. This author is an excellent writer but for some reason seems to almost always end the story before the real ending. We need a "Paul Harvey" to tell us "the rest of the story". In this case, there is a lot left untold. Was Jack really that stupid as to go after Tom's girlfriend and not expect any repercussions? What made Kelly so susceptible to Tom? Was Tom exaggerating or was Jack (still) chasing other women even while married? Did Kelly really mind ending her marriage?
Didn't really like the start of the story. Don't think it really helped the story at all.
In the end, well written but too many holes for me to give a 5.
Another great one, the meeting of three flawed people, two of them with a dark past.
I had read this one a while ago, but I was too "green" at the time to appreciate the quality of your writing. It's superb!
Why do your women disproportionately succumb to the slut ray? Seriously: You're telling a compelling story, than the woman just can't control herself. What? I don't know these women. Not that I want to.
There are tons of great writers on this site, some are friends of mine but in my estimation, GirlintheMoon tops us all. No one understands human emotions as she does and no one can express them better. I gave this the same score I give to all her stories, 5 stars.
Jack just stands there...uh huh. Another story of two narcissists and the copyrighted, LW weak, cuck husband character dressed up in bodice-ripper language.
He told Tom everything?
Average
Tom got revenge.
Both assholes
She cheated by being caught in middle.
If that's all it took to break them up, they are better off with other people. Clear the chessboard and start again.