Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here"What's wrong?" I asked her.
"I told you she could get pregnant you asshole, but you shot your wad inside her anyway. A week ago she was a virgin, and now she is probably knocked up!
I know how much you came in me, if it's even close to that, 9 months from now you're going to be a dad, you want that shit on your conscience?" she said, screaming at me now.
"Come on mom, it isn't that bad, I'm 18!" Lisa pleaded.
"Yeah, 18 and pregnant with your fucking stepbrother's kid! How do you think that'll go? That kid will get made fun of its's whole life, you're an incest baby!" she air quoted, mocking someone in a bullying tone.
"Mom, fuck, settle down. I'm not pregnant, and if I do end up pregnant, I'll either abort or give it up for adoption." Lisa said matter of factly, now standing at the foot of the bed, my cum running down her legs.
April stood up faster than I've ever seen her move, drew her hand back, and slapped Lisa across the cheek pretty hard. Lisa grabbed her face, instantly sobbing,
"Fuck you, how dare you hit me, what are you turning into him now? Stay away from me!" she cried hysterically as she slammed and locked the door to her bedroom.
April lowered her head, realizing she had hit her own daughter, she got caught up in the heat of the moment.
"I didn't know how to stop, she made me so mad by saying that, my only reaction was to slap the shit out of her." April said, trying to reason with me.
She turned her attention to me, and quickly became angry.
She screamed "You asshole, you caused this. I told you not to cum in her and you did anyway!" she said now crying.
"I slapped my daughter, just like he used to slap me around, all because of you!" she screamed louder.
"Hang on this isn't just on me!" I defended myself as I stood up. Wrong thing to say, as I learned the hard way.
"Get your shit and get the fuck out of here now! You will not sleep here tonight, sleep in your truck or your dad's precious boat if you have to but I want you out tonight!" she said sternly through tear filled eyes. I hung my head and walked out, collecting my clothes as I walked out.
I packed up and left that night. Lisa called several times, begging me to come back, but April made it pretty clear she didn't want me back.
"As long as she lives in my house, Lisa will never see you again. Don't try to come back." That was a message on my answering machine when I got home, April's voice. That was fun while it lasted, but I guess too good to be true got me again.
I didn't notice anywhere in the story that anyone was LEGALLY adopted. So there is no step anything !!
What could have been a good story. As soon as the junkie deadbeat dad got back from jail, this turned into a major turd sandwich. As soon as you said the bum dad fucked the daughter, I stopped reading.
This could have been good, but turned out to be shit.
Thanks for trying.
Wanna read more on Lisa maybe moving out and getting plowed in the ass by the step bro.
Rabbitman is right, the weight doesn't make sense, 105lb with C cups isn't believable. If there is a part 2, correct that. But the rest, leave it alone. Not everyone is cookie cutter in an abusive family. It may not sit well with some, while others relate because of their experiences. I hope there's a part 2, and more. Good start, don't get discouraged because of one negative comment, it's part of writing! Keep it cumming!
Couldn't get past the first page. First a woman who's 5'6" and 105 would practically be emaciated. But the worst was you have the kids liking Day after he beat their mother half to death. Never. Children of men who severely beat their mothers invariably despise the fathers and they don't spend time with them. You had the kids really liking him then a paragraph later he's beating the new wife. Awful.