All Comments on 'Twins Across the Road Ch. 03'
by rnebular
- 11 Comments
It would be great if you keep it going. Maybe the twins and him can get back together after college? Keep up the excellent work.
Great story, thank you, and I really enjoyed it.
Small point, and not nitpicking I promise, but Jameson's isn't scotch, it's Irish whiskey:-)
Would have been 5 stars except 2 things. Felt rushed at end leaving some undone issues, and was really hoping that John and Teri would work end up together.
A fun hot story in some respects. But I can't get a fix on our protagonist in this one....Is he the studly older guy who the hot twin neighbor babes cannot resist? Is he just a lucky schmuck--right place, right time? Or is he a loser who never goes anywhere and preys upon the poor ladies who are deposited by Fate practically on his doorstep?
The whole plot of this entire story seems to have been to write one sex seen after another. Finally the last of this marginal story line just left the reader hanging wondering what ultimately happened. This author has written much better stories. This one should go in the trash can.
... I had thought I remembered more to it.
Really wish there was.
Onward anticipating a good read!
The ending sidebar "Also in This Series" only guides you to these 3 chapters.
To find the next follow-up (I think it just wonderfully, touchingly progresses this great story), go to the Submissions page of rnebular and select
Twins Reunion.
At the end of Twins Reunion is an author's note guiding us to 3 more (yay!) sequels to this superb series. (Using the Submissions dates may help to guide you to the reading order.)
(I'm going there now to read those last three.)
Happy (continued) reading.
Paul in Oklahoma