All Comments on 'Unexpected Guest Ch. 08'

too short ;; Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next!

We need background information on them. Such a great story and erotic as hell

I thought you would never post again!!

great chapter - but way to short, i can't wait to read more.

dont take so long to submit another chapter!!! I LOVE this story!! i really want to see what happens between them in the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't make us beg for the conclusion of this sweet story! Submit please!

another great chapter!

This was such a sweet chapter. Can't wait to read the next one!

I've been out of town for a few days, so it was a nice treat to see an update to this story when I came back. I love the chemistry between these two characters and she's a fool if she doesn't admit that she loves him.

I only go to this site to check if you have updated. I really like how you build the tension between the characters. Leaves me feeling hot all over and wishing I'm the heroin in the story..

I love this series. The characters are so relatable and your writing is far superior to most on this sight. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue this soon.

I just happened to randomly pick a story in the LIT list and found UNEXPECTED GUEST.... the next thing i knew I was at chapter 8 and then end and my entire brain screamed out "Noooooooooo....... where's the rest!" Then i noticed the date and realized it was a newer story and not one someone had started years ago but left unfinished. I adore this story and really wish that it was in book form. *smiles* Had it been I would probably have bought every copy on the shelf. Awesome job.

I have thoroughly enjoyed every one of the stories in this chapter. I'm dying to know what happens next but I completely understand the delay, being a parent myself. Congratulations on your child and I can't wait to read the rest of this story.

Wow, Ada Stuart, i really love this story! You're a fantastic writer and it would be such a shame to leave this story hanging. Please continue this story, it is honestly my favourite in the whole of literotica.

xoxo

Ell

It's been a while since you updated this story. I sure hope you're planning to finish! I'd like to find out how their story ends!

This story is absolutely amazing...please continue writing it! Oh and i've read your other stories and must say that you are a very talented and brilliant writer!!!

Please, oh plese, oh please finish this story! It's one of the best ones I've read on Literotica and I am dieing to know what happens!!! PLEASE!

OMG...U CAN NOT LEAVE IT LYK DIS...WHAT HAPPENED? THERE HAS TO B MOE...TELL ME THERE'S MORE...

OMG!!!

What's next??? Please don't leave it like this.

I want to know more.

Please continue soon.

please continue this story...i have to kno wat happens next!! plz plz keep going :)

Both on the birth of your child and on being able to write and create interesting characters.

We know you are busy now and this is a wonderful time in your life and that of your child. Be selfish with your time, knowing that, when you again have the inclination, there are fans who will enjoy your writing.

LOVE! MAKES YOU SILLY RIGHT. LOVE THIS STORY.

A short but very moving chapter. Is love starting to emerge or will there be bumps and divergences on the road ahead. Well written and lovely dialogue as usual.