All Comments on 'Up North Ch. 09'

Waiting for Part 2. Thanks

It was this site and writers like you, who have inspired me to write for the first time since highschool.

Thank you. I look forward to reading "the rest of the story".

Yes it's a prelude but too much detail and not enough sex for such a hot rating. I hope the conclusion is better

3/19/2020 stuck in the house cause of the coronavirus I read your story. I love a long chapter story if the author can catch and keep my attention. I did not comment on the other chapters thinking I’d write a review at the last chapter. I’m sorry but your story disappeared as in people suddenly got old, new people arrived for what purpose, a sense of time travel with the story. The first 6 chapters were really great, in fact it took several days to read them. But the last four just didn’t do it for me. Story line and character development were good.