All Comments on 'Anal With My Best Friend's Girl'
by doitright
- 44 Comments
I liked the slow build up. The taboo aspect of fucking your best friends girl. Well done i hope you write about a second encounter.
Almost similar to how I had anal with my friend's girl. Guilt and pleasure at the same time. Five stars.
Thanks.
thanks so much...very well done! More please
You covered the feelings of all the characters of this story and did it well. The conflicting feelings and the passion mean that this may not end well, but tell us more if you can about these two. Thanks 5 stars
Outstanding. You captured so many passing, subtle sensations, particularly in the first half.
Guess she was caught up in the moment, especially as oral remained strictly off the table when they began.
I loved this one as much as the last one. I'd like to see more Bianca, please. We need to read about her losing her cherry. Though Danitza is great as well. I'd like to read more about her as well. Five stars!
Try "anal" and "virgin" for story rosa-blanca.ru...you might get more readers...
I loved everything about this story, from the taboo subject of best friends girl, to the dirty details of the sex, it was just perfect! Very well written!
Believe me, you appear to have a natural talent for this. This is great work, u're on your way to becoming a literotica master writer. When time permits; please do produce more. 10 / 10
it‘s been a while since I‘ve enjoyed a story as much as this one. you really have what it takes, so don‘t stop now.
Writers like you are what make me feel so wrong and so fucking good at the same time.
Very consistent, clear sense of character, and .... anal passage! Go for it, folks!
It was a really good story i enjoyed it you should write a part 2. You can keep it going
She may have enjoyed it I'll never know...asscracker.
You are a shitty lay ma man.
In my book this story is a TOUR DE FORCE and a MUST READ!
I gave you a 5+ (5.5 = 110%, ☆☆☆☆☆+).
❤. 👍👍!
Danitza is a keeper! Full stop. Period!
She also gets a 5.5 (❤💚❤💚❤+)! 👍👍!
I would easily fall in love with her!
Excerpt from page 2 of the story:
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Ah, yes, my finger touched her secret opening. I felt where her skin met in a blend muscle, heat, and tender, tender skin. The instant I touched her puckered rosebud she clamped her butt cheeks closed on my finger and held me tight. Her muscled cheeks had snapped shut like a mouse trap on my intruding finger.
"Oh." She said to me in the softest voice I'd ever heard. "I've never been touched there."
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One simply MUST love a girl with such a ravenous a nd insatiable anal hunger. And there simply MUST bebe at least one sequel filled with analingus and multiple "close calls" where the true lovers are nearly caught by their increasingly boring and unnecessary partners. And then a second sequel where Danitza winds up pregnant from some stray semen that hevaccidentally sprays wildly onto her cunt lipswhen Jr nuts as he's pulling out of her ass, and they end up marrying.
I loved everything about this story except for the very end. WE NEED MORE!!!
This story has been very well received by Literotica users. It has so far got 398 favorites out of 397.6k views, which is a tad more than 1 fave (favorite) per 1k views.
5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟) ❤❤!
It seems that it has been a few months since someone commented so I wanted to keep the banter going. I enjoyed this story a lot. If you find a lady that is into anal, never let her go. I know that being a back door bandit is not for everyone and that's ok. Been a while for me but, not butt, not a lot of ladies even want to talk about it.
Both of your characters are comples and interesting. I enjoyed his insecurities and raw lust facing off with her aloof conceit and ultimate surrender to her selfish inner devil. Nice to find such a provocative and well crafted story. Lots going on! Congrats.
Lovely premise.
Nice and slow. Not rushed. Great build up.
Didn't like the ending. Should have been at least the POSSIBILITY of continued/future ass fucking.
You need an editor/proofreader.
Five stars.
A really hot story with a lovely slow build. There's nothing like anal sex and this was a great description.