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Click here"Strip for me. Take your clothes off. I want to take you here. Here where it all started."
Joan is shocked at my request but quickly pulls her clothes from her wonderful body. I help her to lie back in the dirt. It is soft and smells clean. I am in her quickly. Staring into her eyes, I start to fuck her slowly. She is thrusting her hips up to meet my thrusts into her body. We both climax at the same time. We quickly dress as the sun is setting. I brush the dirt off her back as she pulls her blouse on.
"Feel better?" she asks.
"I do. Have I told you how much I love you?"
"Not for at least five minutes," she giggles as I squeeze her ass pressing her to me.
"I love you, Joan Schuster," I tell her. She swoons, just as she does each time I use her married name.
"I love you too my darling. You will tell me what they did here, won't you?"
"Yes, dear. Maybe tonight in bed," I chuckle.
We hurry back to the cottage and dinner with her parents.
I can't tell you how much I have come to love Joan. I thought I loved her with all my heart all these years, yet as each year passes, I love her more. She is the only woman I want now and will be the only woman I want until I die. I sit here in the easy chair she bought me last Christmas watching her grade papers on the coffee table and feel the love for her course through my veins. She is my love, my wife, and my god mother.
- COMMENTS
This is by far the best Romantic loving and sexy story I have ever read!! Thank you for sharing it with all of us
I have finally read an erotic, romantic and sensual love story. The character and plot/subplot development is extremely good. The respect, passion and sexual intimacy demonstrated and expressed between the characters was beautiful and sincere. The minor grammatical errors, etc does not detract nor lessen the impact of this story.
It was difficult for me to finish the story because of the continuous misuse of tenses and mixing them, even in the same sentence.
As a writer, I think it would be worth your time to re-do this story and make it in the past tense up to the last paragraph. The story line was well thought out and I would have given it 5 *s if it weren't for the horrendous use of verb tenses.
In trying to read this story, I have trouble enjoying it because you mix tenses of verbs in the same sentence and you make no sense of it. Writing is an art that needs your attention, not just your imagination. You constantly cause "reader's whiplash" as I call it because you mix the times of verbs(action) even in the same sentence. The story line is (at least to p.12 where I broke to write this) interesting to me as I have experienced the same type of feelings for a cousin and an aunt. The handling of the relationships could have been much better and more impactful if you had kept the story in the past tense (something that had already happened) instead of trying to makle the reader feel like he/she was there in the moment. No stars yet as I haven't finished the story.
Loved it
Beautiful, lovely, caring, heart-warming. Sexy, alluring, erotic, Kinky. Characters are well rounded, multifaceted, and believable as are the conversations and situations. You write well, adn I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing.
please keep writing the naysayers dont even write so dont worry about them this was excellent
Wonderfully done! Lots of everything for everyone! I hope you keep writing these! Thank you!
But could not get past first sentence here. Please write in past tense. Present tense is too hard to follow.
Besides if he bonks god mother, where is the incest or taboo? Not even blood related.
Was an interesting tale, but very little character build up. Well, to the point I read. I mean, I can understand a lack of character build up for characters that should definitely know each other and have a potential for a relationship. However, he immediately jumps into a relationship with Joan, then Karen, then has a sexual encounter with his mother. Then he has a date with Molly, and though he breaks it off when he goes on his "vacation" he is immediately having sexual conduct with Jan and Flo? Jan was a virgin, and was apparently quite shy about even showing herself in front of Cole. While Flo, actually had a negative experience, which would typically mean she would need more coaxing than less. Also, after only a single night with Joan he is instantly a sex "God", makes no sense. A caring lover, sure, but he will still be a novice. Sorry, I typically prefer longer stories, but with the length I hope for proper character construction. Not wam-bam let's keep going ...