All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 05'
by VirtuallyYours1
- 16 Comments
......to the point it's become ridiculous.
Add to that, the development of the characters & their interactions?......freakishly unreal. I think you need an editor, mate. Losing me here.
Love the build up and how real this feels.
Rare among stories on here.
Keep up the reluctance on the mothers part
5 stars
I really was but you are just dragging this on too long. I’m out.
This series can be best compared to a person chained to a wagon wheel dragging it through the dessert.
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seems to be fading fast. Sort of left us hanging here....and not in a good way...
Losing Me, listen to your readers about dragging it out and the short short chapters...
Should be posted in how to lose readers and the answer is post a sex story that has zero sex, nudity, or adult content. You had potential, but you suck as a writer.
Pretty much just agreeing what others are saying in terms of length of the chapter. I'd understand a short chapter if it were the case that you were rolling them out every few days but it took three weeks to post this chapter. Why not hold on a few more weeks and post something that has a bit more substance if there's going to be a delay anyway?
The story is good, but the pace is too slow. I rated this a 3, but only because of the past chapters. On its own, this is a 1. Seems like this chapter was the first page of what should have been a longer chapter.
If this was a teaser it would have been good.
It’s atarting to get boring cause of the short pages. Gonna give up on reading this.
If Karen's viewing oral sex on her son as the solution to his teenaged come buildup - and she seems to be satisfied with that decision - well, sweetheart...just fuck him. I mean, give him a good ride, a fuck always to be remembered. Get some pleasure out of this for you. Let Josh suck your tits and make him come three times nightly. And, you come often, also, Karen. Make your home an Orgasm Haven.
hope to read Ch. 06 soon and hope it isn't going to stop at fellatio !?!?
This was a nice read but like your other readers telling you it was to short. In my estimation to this story by chapter 4 Karen should have been giving her son long luscious blow jobs and by chapter 5 they should been down and doing the dirty deed. Karen should have been riding him like a rodeo buck riding queen.
and then nothing- you left us all hanging because you did not finish the story