All Comments on 'Naive Teacher in Winston Ch. 09'
by potatoHead42
- 20 Comments
Amazing!!! Really thanks!!!! I love your work!! You are a great writer!!
And how about if unattractive old women grope force kissing to her?
It is good too
This wait felt like forever! But you rewarded us greatly
Been waiting for chapter to for sometime now. Excited.
Would love a side story with lily and Dad (would love some more anal here)
Keen for viv and old folks home. Recommend “helping the elderly” by cockhole brilliant read
Amazing work you’re doing
May you have productive writing sessions!
Regards
L
Small comment, I know you use it for organization and you have people helping you. But could you remove the key word "previews" before the start of sections... some of your readers enjoy the suspense
Thanks everyone!
: you mean the schedule at the “foreword” or the “titles” before each section?
Cheers
This is a wonderful story with lots of character development. It shows how a story can be exciting and erotic without being full of blatant sex. Please keep up the great work. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Won't be another month will it?
Awesome turn of events! Didn't expect the detention scene with Jim. It's nice that Lana has some sort of control over the boys. I think this will have 2 possible outcomes: the boys will finally improve their behaviors (or else, Jim continues to tittyfuck their teacher) OR they intentionally be in detention always as they think that having a chance with Lana's boobs is a good enough incentive. Either way, I'm not complaining.
Thanks for another sizzling chapter. Keep it up.
-Tittyfuck Enthusiast
New follower. Fantastic build up
I sure hope her new uniform will include something to cause her to always have those pink nipples at full attention and really hard. Maybe it is made of a material that is an irritant to her nipples such as if it is made with a course material. Another possibility would be an allergy causing a rash that leads to a prescription shot or lotion that causes weeks of side effects but fails to resolve the constant stimulation. So many possibilities. Even a small clamp on the nipple to hold the top from falling down would be fun.
Involving the doctor, the town nurse, Lliy or even her good promiscuous friend seem as good possibilities for making "cure" suggestions, none of which work but instead lead to making her even more horniness Pure agony, humiliation and inner confliction with her desires?
Add that extra stimulation to her planned weekend of activities and you emerge with a delightfull weekend for everyone except for the ever tormented star of the show.
You don't have to wait a month to post next chapter. The reader's loose interest with all the waiting.
Very good stories, I like when the slow descent of the teacher.
Can't wait for the sequel
Just doing the best I can, shrug,
Balance work, family life and writing :(
My imagination is running overtime. What thoughts must be going through a naive, virgin's mind as she sticks her hands into 17 boys crotches, and studies each of their penises, balls, pee holes, sizes, texture, and shapes. Her mind has to be spinning and so are the imaginations of the readers. That is a fabulous scene and equally fantastic writing.Keep up the good work.
I agree with the previous writer. But think of it from the doctor's perspective. How would you like to be the old Indian doctor watching the young fiance fondling, touching and, caressing nearly two dozen different cocks and balls. Watching her eyes, wondering what can be going through her mind, interpreting her thoughts, watching her enjoyment, noticing her studying each cock and ball. What is she really thinking as she plays with all of her new toys.
I love the hands on examination by the teacher but where in the world could you find six students in a row that would not be rock hard. Nervous or not, no six high school boys can not be hard with their 26 year old sexual bombshell teacher fondling .their balls and staring and inspecting their dicks.
What an extraordinary and extremely sexy chapter!
The ending was perfect: a drunk fiancé who can't satisfy his future bride. His condition aggravates the misunderstandings between them :-) They are very naive, which would be sexy as hell in real life. Lana is too lustful, horny and caught up in her thoughts to realize that her husband doesn't understand the real circumstances.
This trustworthy future wife is already lying (Simon), which would have been almost impossible a few days before. She gets "naughty" and "wicked" and doesn't mind. She has now crossed some boundaries. Since your play is so mindful and positive, I'm sure her slutification is not as exaggerated as others. Lana seems like a lovable slut. That's what sets your story apart from other stories.
There are many (too many? :-D) dicks in this chapter. No, I was just kidding. I like the old perverts, and there are many of them (Principal Bill / Professor Henry / Jack Senior / Dr. Hardik), and you already mentioned the nursing home. I look forward to seeing many more old perverts. In contrast, there are the young, strong guys and also the middle-aged guys. What a wonderful world for this future slut wife.
You did a great job as always. You are a true master of corruption! All these hot events, one after the other. It's a constant excitement that is incredible.
Lana should buy sexy lingerie and outfits to accompany her transformation! I also hope that her horniness will increase even more.
Please never leave out the thought bubbles! It adds so much tension to the story and keeps me constantly excited.
A note to all impatient readers: a good story takes a lot of time, but rushing is not the answer! potatoHead42: Take your time. We all know you have a real life.
5 stars, but I'd like to give it 10!
ok funny comment here. The story is good, writing is above average, editing/proofreading was better than the last few chapters. But something, I find funny. You give some great descriptions. But in 9 chapters, I dont think your protagonist ever wears shoes... Never once have I seen you say she is wearing shoes, much less what kind(s). The rest of her outfits you do very well on. I find it quite amusing.