Hotcappucino

I'm a 64 year old Asian, married with two children. Pretty standard life, other than my interest in writing erotic stories. The Hunter (NonConsensual, 4 pages) is my first foray into writing erotic literature (or any other kind of literature, for that matter). I've got ideas for three or four more stories, including a follow-up to The Hunter, but not all of my ideas are NonConsent stories. I welcome all criticisms, good or bad. My aim is to become better polished. Thanks for your comments.