Thank you all for reading and commenting my latest story, "An unexpected housemaid Ch.2" I appreciate all the kind comments, but also the criticism. I read again my stories, as they are now published on the site, and I was surprised to notice how many errors and inconsistencies sliped in, even after I checked the draft twice.
As you could probably notice, I'm not a native English speaker, in fact I rarely speak or write in English. Also, before publishing these short stories on Lit, I never wrote literature, so I'm quite a novice.
I'm now working on Chapter 3, and this time I'll try to do a better job.
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