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A very shallow wife and a dedicated husband trying to do what's right for somebody else. I've been in a few legal predicaments, nothing like in this tory though. I was extremely fortunate to have someone in court room give me some insight and advice for the predicament I was in. That...

Can’t wait!

Here is an interesting tidbit. Persian or Faarsi is inexorably linked to the Indian subcontinent. Prior to the colonisation of India by the British, Persian was the link language to the various other Indian languages and was extensively used in trade, politics, literature...

Wonderfully erotic and very realistic - love it

outstanding

10 More Big Blazing Stars for Mr. Saddle Tramp. What a Great Great Writer you are sir! I only have one question for you. When I read any of your story "out loud" to myself, you ALWAYS sound just like Burt Reynolds. I can't figure that out. I love ALL your writing, you are one of the...

An entertaining but, in the end, pointless story. The situation between the husband and wife remains relayively unchanged from what it was after her initial “reveal”. For a lawyer, he seems to go to great pains to avoid directly confronting issues until it becomes almost literally...

Love this storey, you are a fantastic author! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Old guys still got it!

5

I agree with Anonymous in the second entry below this message. A family is a union; when someone betrays that union, the "glue" that holds it together is broken. Then they victimize it a second time by demanding "forgiveness" a.k.a. forgetting the betrayal, so they get to enjoy being...

Good first story!

4

I enjoyed this one very much. Thank you.

Good first story!

4

Yes

I'm crying too!

Everything said is right, But they are human. Will is a stand-up guy, a real straight shooter. I would go to war with that guy. Give a second chance. the sex will be over the moon. 5 stars, the Bear loves this story. More, please.

The BEAR

Short but sweet.

Thanks very much, texloo. Glad you enjoyed the story. It's only the second story I've attempted from a female point of view which, being a guy, is always risky.

Well the author was right, it's not a BTB in the normal LW way, but it did burn out the stupid/slut part of Jan that caused the problems. When I was reading him coming home that first night I bet myself that he was too drunk to even remember about locking the doors, nailed it! While...

The ending of this segment (gotta have a sequel or it will be an under-done LW) suggests that Sweetie knows Hubby is a voyeur. The couple’s parting interchange is disjointed … but it does match up if she does know or suspects that Hubby might have bugged their house. Her comment...

WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT??? NO, Just no.-1 star.

The BEAR

5 stars aren't even close to enough. Take all of mine and any I get in the future. This is beyond anything I will ever be capable of. Utterly and completely perfect.

Very hot. What happened next?

Great story kudos

Great concept, but far too rushed. It's half baked at best.

Good story. Felt like it may have really happened. Write more.

fantastic build up. More please. I am eager to know what happens next. Hope they make a go of being together.

Please continue

Both women deserve to be divorcee's and homeless. PERIOD

Another amazing story

Love this.

I hope we hear more about them.

I think I would have liked it better if they were original characters instead of sitcom stars. The action was hot though so I just changed the names in my head when I read them. I planned on giving it 4 stars but the fact that page 4 was only the words "the end" got you that fifth...

I loved the story, got me excited lol.

Shame the Anonymous people have to have their say without writing their own stories

I love these stories!! More please??

Enjoying the story!

6.26.24. Reading this story again reminds me why I so muss this writer here on Lit. Rehnquist could weave words to make me feel like I was one or more of his characters. Just like here.

PrincessNutNut 7 months ago I agree. Why do I read these intense emotional stories. I think...