BDSM Story Comments

I know this story may have some asking when I'll be writing Online Chastity or The Suit again. First off... I apologize for my absence. Didn't mean to leave you all hanging like that... but life gets in the way and it can be hard to prioritize writing these stories at times. I wanted...

I can feel the intensity and the potential

She is just the kind of editor that I need.....

Quite obviously nobody realizes you are from India. English is not your first language. That being said, I thought for first time submission it was excellent.

This story restored my faith in Literotica. I have read the first few paragraphs of many many stories only to abandon them. Poor grammar, ridiculous situations, impossible actions and reactions and poorly written characters are just a few of the things I find in much, if not most,...

Please continue this.

10 Big blazing Stars for an interesting and unusual story. I can not really accept a hubby that lets other men whip his wife. I would have to see how many 10mm bullets his head could take before it wasn't there anymore. LOL No One, ever hurts my women but me! LOL Thanks Buster2U

Magic… again a fun idea with lots of room to explore. Can’t wait for more.

Loved it… having been a crash test dummy on occasion, for a group, it brought up pleasant memories.

I had some trouble clearly imagining the furniture, especially the middle pieces.

I’d also have liked more detail, more teasing, more about the various women touching him, more of...

The beginning of this series seemed to be similar to many female Domination/male sub stories. Then chapter 2, wham! Now we have a plot! Medical emergency. Intrigue. Ghosting. Reconciliation. Then Domination revived! Now comes the good stuff. How far will she go? Will he eventually...

This needs a follow up.

well done. can't turn the pages fast enough

Absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next one!

This was great! Thanks! Will you write new stories?

When u upload next part

I'd love to see her next day there. Spending all morning wondering how her next meeting with him goes.

Wow this was an intense chapter, fantastic!! Hoping the story is not ending when John goes from being boyfriend to ex-boyfriend cuckolded sissy bitch maid with locked baby dick. Rebecca should keep John as her bitch servant forever, there could be so much awesome humiliation left...

Great story, kept me gripped beginning to end

nice chapter even with it being so short. Hope we see more soon and maybe a little larger chapter.

Best chapter yet, by far!

Wonder if Katie's Mom becomes pregnant with that young guy's kid(s) or not.

Rebecca seems to push John further and further into submission and based on the intro to this chapter I get the feeling she's going to push in a way that finally fractures John's feelings for her. As it's pointed out.. she's a former girlfriend.

The wait was definitely worth it, I had worried the story was going to be abandoned.

The professor is still a pathetic loser who should just die and stop embarrassing men everywhere and Brooke belongs in a whore house, or a nut house, or both. They should have packed up and moved away after the asshole made his predictions. Just get a fresh start elsewhere. This story...

what was in the contract besides her owing them each a million? contracts are not enforceable unless there something in it for all involved parties

Thank for the fans who comment on here, I don't reply (because I am like a ghost 🤭) but I read each one and I am thankful . I want to say, it makes me want to share more of my own stories, which is not easy 😘

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Great début i Hope we can read netx parts very soon!

Please keap goinf love you're stories

I loved this chapter! I am already anxious for the next one!!

Wonderful story

Repetitive.

Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely.

Not sexy, not erotic just sadly pathetic. This guy would be in hospital by now.

This was a great story and I’m looking forward to the remaining chapters. Reminds me of my “freewheeling” twenties. Living in the moment. No real care for the future. I think we’ve all had friends like these in our lives.

I guess it is bdsm with a heavy touch of noncon. Would like additonal chapters.

This is a beautiful story of submission. Likewise, i would not object to a bit more humiliation and other bdsm aspects in your next story, but you clearly have an excellen talent.