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Click here"I think that got her attention," Jen said. She dressed again, smiling. "You'll like it, I promise. It's fun. Makes sex a lot more interesting. The trick is to use a short barbell and pierce right at the very top of the hood, so it lands right where it needs to." She pulled on a pair of rubber gloves. "When I got mine, I had to learn how to sit down all over again. It took a couple of weeks before I could sit without coming. I've had this piercing for three years now, and if I don't pay attention it can still happen. My sister got married a couple of months ago in a park in Cambridge. I sat down a bit too hard on the bench, and, well..." She grinned wider. "It was an unexpected thrill, let's say."
"She is not allowed to have an orgasm without permission unless she's being used," Anthony said,
"Well, then, you might have to punish her quite a bit for the first couple weeks." Jen sat on a short stool at Eileen's feet. "Now, let's see..." She pulled back Eileen's hood, exposing her clit. "Wow! Her kitty is really purring. Is she always this revved up?"
"Being tied down helps. Being made to expose herself in front of strangers helps too. But mostly, yeah."
Eileen blushed. Jen's finger touched her clit. Pleasure shot through her. She stiffened, gasping.
"Oh, she's fun," Jen said. "I can see why you like her." She picked up a long, narrow package from the tray and tore it open. Eileen shivered when she saw the needle inside.
Jen brought a thin plastic tube under her hood. She poised the tip of the needle above it. Eileen felt the sharp tip touch her skin. She trembled in fear, eyes glued to the shining metal.
"Breathe. Nice and slow," Jen said. "Look at me."
Eileen tore her gaze from the needle. She looked into the woman's calm brown eyes. "Like that," Jen said. "Relax. Breathe with me."
The tension inside her uncoiled just a little bit. Eileen's breath steadied. "Yes," the woman said. "Take a nice deep breath now."
Quivering, Eileen obeyed. She held it for a long moment. "Okay," Jen said, "let it out, nice and slow."
Midway through exhaling, Eileen felt a quick pinch, followed by a twisting, tugging sensation. Her heart pounded. She imagined the woman lining up the needle, preparing to shove it through her skin. She caught her breath, waiting for it to happen.
"All done!" Jen said. "See, that wasn't so bad, right?"
Eileen looked down, surprised. Shiny metal gleamed between her legs. "Not as bad as you thought it would be, was it? You'll have to take care of it until it heals. Should take about a month. Thomas will give you a list of instructions." Her eyes glittered. "And don't touch it!" She looked at Anthony. "That goes for you, too. Hands off. Keep it clean. No fluids on it for at least four weeks. No vaginal sex, no oral without a dam." She wagged his finger at him. "I mean it."
He spread his hands, grinning. "Okay! Okay! She has other holes I can use for a while."
"Good. If you break your toys, you can't play with them any more."
Eileen flushed again. The sting from the needle had already faded. Her clit throbbed and trembled against the touch of hard metal. Thomas untied the ropes as efficiently as he had tied them. She stood, unsteady. Her fingers brushed the back of her neck, found cling wrap.
Anthony seized her roughly, pulling her close. His lips met hers, roughly, in a long, passionate kiss. She squirmed for a moment in his grip before she surrendered to it. Her lips parted for his tongue.
"Good," he said. "You are my darling, precious sex slave, and now I own you utterly." He smiled. "I have marked you and pierced you so that you will never forget this day. Let's go home. How does that saying go? Today is the first day of the rest of your life. I think we should get started."
Author's note: I haven't decided whether I want to continue this story or start a new one. I'm also thinking about turning this story into an ebook. Your ideas are welcome!
- COMMENTS
Oh so much more could be done use your skills and make it happen. A hidden slut can't wait till Daddy finds his daughter the sexy "Sex Slave" TRUE FIVE STAR.
Ich habe die Geschichte jetzt zum 2. Mal gelesen und bin immer noch begeistert. Ich werde sie sicher auch weiterhin wiederholt lesen, weil sie mich genau dort abholt, wo ich es brauche. Das Meiste war mir immer noch pressent. Aber an eine Stelle konnte ich mich nicht mehr gross erinnern. Das war dort, als sie im Käfig bestraft wurde. Mit Klammern ihre äusseren und inneren Schamlippen gespreizt, damit ihre Vagina schön geöffnet war. Ich finde das faszinierend. Das ist eine meiner neuen Lieblingsstellen in dieser Geschichte.
Ich könnt heulen weil die Geschichte zu Ende ist. Sie hat mich immer so geil und nass gemacht. Da sie die Geschichte vor langer Zeit geschrieben haben, denke ich, dass es keine Fortsetzung gibt. Wirklich schade. Ich wäre gerne noch weiter mit den beiden auf Reisen gegangen, um zu sehen was noch alles passiert.
Anonymace has summed it up so perfectly, exactly my thoughts and fantasies. I enjoyed the series so much as I also need these "helpless forced fantasies" to orgasm. (I'm female)
I'd also wish there to be a bit more of locking her in or really forcing her at the beginning. I love a good struggle.
I was reading the story bit by bit while pleasuring myself. Thanks so much for some entertaining and pleasureful weeks ❤️
I have mixed feelings about this one. Parts of it are amazing and extremely relatable, other parts feel too unrealistic.
Obviously, those that are offended that the relationship is nonconsensual should check the category and make their way elsewhere. It is fantasy and no one is endorsing doing this to a woman in real life. Although there are enough women in the comments that do have some of these dynamics consensually with their partners/Masters, and more power to them!
The biggest thing I loved about this series is how Eileen struggled with her sexuality and her fantasies. This is extremely relatable as I share her fetish. I also have never had an orgasm that wasn't triggered by imaginary rape scenarios (me as victim). It is a paradox that is truly hard to parse when you can only get off to something that a significant part of you would not want or triggers sex repulsion. Sexual repression is also very relatable. I especially appreciate how Eileen maintains a level of reluctance to the end, as it is explicitly key to her libido that she feel helpless and not given a choice. So many of these stories are written as bad ends where the girl finally escapes and seeks revenge, or suddenly gets addicted to magic cock and becomes 100% eagerly consentual at the very end. It is a rare story that explores some people's legitimate need to feel helpless and have that power exchange in order to feel sexually satisfied.
The part of this story that I find less realistic is her lack of fight in the beginning. I don't think a girl as sexually repressed and embarrassed as Eileen would stay with Anthony early on. Maybe during the honeymoon but not once home. Even if she was beginning to suspect that she needed what Anthony was forcing on her, I think she would have reached out to her mother or other family for advice, and that would be game over. I think a few weeks imprisoned upstairs or an attempted escape would give this a little more believability. It could also be that helpless struggling is something that turns me on and I wish she was a little more mindbroken and a little less doormat from the start. I know my favorite fantasy masters run on the sadist side and enjoy the struggle too, so this could just be a me thing...
Similarly, even if she reluctantly submitted to all the forced exhibition, I find it a bit hard to swallow that someone wouldn't have called the cops on some of the more obvious public humiliation scenes. Consenting or not, there are laws about that.
Anyway. Very entertaining read. I appreciate a story that recognizes and validates my predilections. (Again, within fantasy, no one here is legitimizing rape or sex trafficking in the real world.
It takes a sick perverted mind to come up with Stor like this no woman would willingly do this without finding someway to kick the guy in the balls or something and then get away from him.
I love being my husbands sex slave, submitting to him turns me on. Reading this I came so much once he finds out I can’t wait to see how he chooses to punish me. I wish to be taken by him in public for every one to see how much he owns me.
I’m sick of reading non con stories where the female character lacks a backbone the best thing Eileen could do is get a great divorce lawyer an leave the psycho an then her ex could have an unfortunate accident and end up on the receiving end of everything he did to Eileen that would be a great ending
Very well written on the whole, but subtract 1 star for lack of physical description of the characters, especially Eileen.
Really rather long, a bit repetitive at times, but quite good. Except for the tattooing.
This woman enjoyed being a sex slave as much as the North Koreans love Kim Jong-un. Author and everyone voted higher than 1 star should be on NSOPW
Loved it all until the tattooing.
A really great story spoiled by a totally unnecessary detail.
This is a true masterclass in pavlovian conditioning! A bit too rapey for my personal taste but the writing is stellar!
This was well written enough for make me to be utterly afraid that she’d been trapped by a psychopath who would eventually convince her that—even as he killed her—she wanted to die. If you tell someone enough times that they’re in denial and subconsciously want whatever horrid thing is done to them, will they not begin to believe you?
How will we ever know that he didn’t simply break her mind? Did he even love her? Is he even capable of it? She wasn’t adored and “precious”until she became exactly what *he* decided she wanted to be. I’ll have to come back to this and read again to see if I get a different feel. I’m really unhappy for her right now that she’s living *his* version of an exciting life, not knowing what she actually ever wanted.
Firstly, amazing writing. Writer definitely knows how to pull a person into their world, and keep readers engaged. Now that I see Anthony's end game, which was to create a mindless, masochist, exhibitionist, bi-sexual, pain slut sex slave, I lost all respect for this character. I understand this is fiction, but part of reading a story is to emerse yourself in said story. As a female, I can't help but relate, or try to, to the female character. She has nothing of her own, every bit of self was stripped away, because as Anthony said over and over and over again, her wants/needs/desires doesn't matter.
Once again amazing writing, main characters are a bit frustrating and very disappointing after reading through to the end.
Please let us know what you decide! I would love more in any way! I have reread the series more times than I can count and crave more every time I finish.
Magnificent. This is one of the best works of erotic fiction I’ve ever read, and a beautifully sensitive—if unconventional—romance.
Really like this! Would love for it to be continued; seems to be more to still be studied. I will say that as he was making her sign away all her rights, i worried that he was getting ready to sell her! That would be a horrible tragedy. I like that he seems to value her more as it goes on.
Good development. It would be nice to see her really embrace her role as a slave and see them truly connect. Some more punishments for coming without permission with the new piercing would be nice.
What an amazing series. I'm so sad there's no more of their story, hoping you continue it!
I read this several years ago and just re-read it completely. This is by far my favorite story on here...or anywhere really.
There's still a long way to go.
Continue.
Shaving, Mum and Dad (where are they) perhaps her Mom with all the advice is the same, maybe it's hereditary?. Mothers are always giving b/s advice to their children about how they 'wished' things were but in reality. . . haven't a clue.
Clit pump, nipple pumps, vulva pumps, remote clit stimulators, clit hood weights . . . long list
A weekend loaner?. Female borrowed, the Nurse would be an excellent day fit.
Exploration.
Amazing how many outraged anon's apparently stumbled into the non-consent category, do they also attend church to verbalise their atheism?
Fantastic story, wish there were more chapters.
Another idea would be to write some chapters of her turning on him as she would over power him and shoves dildo's up his ass and mouths killing him and making it look like a freaking kinky sexual accident
This was fantastic. I have been cumming all over my self reading this. Please continue this, i can see weekend transfers to his friends, forcing her to smoke weed, 3 hole fucking,etc.
Well that’s quite a long story, well thought out and full of details ( you do have a deprived mind😄) bit far fetched in so many areas but still good writing be interesting to see how much you have in mind if you do do a follow up.
Pretty intense. One thing I can’t fathom is how someone can live a life of constant uncertainty. I get the need for loss of control. I imagine one would have to give up any ideas of self. I suppose there are worse ways to get past parental and societal programming. Not really my cup of tea, but honestly, I couldn’t stop reading. Well done.
Thought that she would find a way to slowly kill him in the ending. He is a POS
What a beautiful love story! Reading the comments, it is hard to believe some readers don’t understand how much love, time and effort Anthony put in to creating a perfect little world for Eileen. Well written and captivating, this is one of the best things I’ve read on Literotica. I sincerely hope you are still writing and have gone on to find a publisher who appreciates and supports your work. If I knew where to find it, I’d most certainly buy it. I especially enjoyed the instructional sections of the story...while Eileen and Anthony will flit about in my memory, some of the things I learned from the story have played out in the bedroom, much to the delight of my husband. I hated to see the story end and honestly would have come back for as many chapters as you were generous enough to share...and that is exactly what this was, generosity. Thank you!
I SO enjoyed this book. I’m sure I’ll read it again and again. I wish I’d found a man who put so much effort into my sexual happiness.
One of the most erotic BDSM / non con stories on Literotica and I’ve been reading this site for 25 years. Would love another series about their lives a few years later.
I’m so sad I’ve been reading this off and on for weeks and you just end it like that:/
I’d love it to turn into an ebook! I’ve reread this many times and certainly enjoy it. A new story would be great too, I love the writing style
So finally got through this piece it is well written and 95% erotically charged fantasy porn. Or at least that is what I'm *hoping* it is.
If it is as I suspect I would put a disclaimer at the front 1. Bc Non-con means something different to everyone and I believe an author should do their best to trigger as few people as possible 2. To let the masses, *especially* those easily confused by fantasy and reality, know that this is *fiction* and that you don't support *actual* grooming, assault, or rape.
Besides pandering to those who confuse fantasy and reality by omitting the disclaimer I have to say this was good read.
Eileen must take revenge in the same way as the people who made her a sex slave,
especially to Anthony, Dr. Moreland, Samantha and the tattoo shop.
Eileen would retaliate even more cruelly in the same way that these people wished to die but couldn't
It's one of the best stories here and I read the series to the end. You have a great imagination, very original. There were very few typos too – good sub-editing is evident. I was also thinking about turning some stories I have written into a book because I think they are too good to 'waste' here or that it might spoil a wider release. But I wonder what barriers lie between hard-core material and a wider audience? Have you investigated that? Can you publish and make money from an e-book? The Story of O got wide distribution. Meanwhile my only comments on your series are that it could use a bit more description of Eileen, and I was waiting for her full-fledged debut being provided to others in gang-bangs, as a party girl and in back rooms at parties – maybe some public sex and putting her into professional sex work. My (mostly true) stories go to most of those places!
Well written and kept me close to cumming several times. Can’t cum without permission so had to stop and beg for permission before I got in trouble. :)
This story was hard to read at times I’m into rape play but some of that I had to skip over my bf and I play around with rape play but I will say he does say I love you little whore before they go to bed at some point I. The story it was good to read in some sex scenes but the whole story was hard for me to read because I’d never let that happen to me but of course this is a fantasy story I. The non consent section of this website, so people need to understand what they are getting into when they look up non consent
This story is one of my absolute favorites. I’ve read it and reread it and even planned our own bdsm scenes around it. Haters gonna hate but the writing is phenomenal. Please go for the full ebook! I will be first in line.
Also, it’s a storyyyyyyy! If you don’t like it don’t read it. It’s in the nonconsent category. What did you expect?
turtle writes is a professional writer telling about all real life evils he inflicted on unwilling women to condition her otherwise how can it be so detailed balanced with both care and abuse
its a real life story of turtles being abusive with his partners willing or unwilling so detailed its not a fantasy
anthony never says i love u not even once so there are more than eileen on his project right?
u did raped and pimped lil girls turtles ,didnt you dont deny that!
Your story is so completely different than the one written here. Trust me when I say I understand what you went through, I was repeatedly sexually abused as a child as well.
The singular difference between our stories and hers is that our husbands love us, unconditionally. They understand our pain, guilt and the shame that we feel even though our logical brain tells us the truth, that none of it was our fault. Not even the death of the abuser frees you from the nightmares and the triggers.
The man in the story doesn’t love his wife, she’s a toy to him, for reasons that I don’t understand she feels as though she has no choice but to stay with him. From what I could stomach to read it’s not made clear why she doesn’t just leave. As much as I despise the word, because it makes me flinch every time, she has been “groomed”. I suppose the old fashioned term is that she’s been brain washed. Raped, tortured, brain washed, broken and conditioned to obey, he has dehumanised and objectified her every step of the way, then hidden it from polite society. Well it’s hidden until he tortures her more by ripping away the false protection of being amongst other people.
She started the story as sexual repressed but he’s a monster with no no conscience or compassion. By the end she’s a shell of a human being. IF it was consensual I’d be happy to read this but it’s not. Nobody has the right to treat another human being this way. For those weirdos who wish to be in her place grow the fuck up, I hope you never find yourself in a position where you have no choice. It’s a bad place.
To the author, clearly you have talent I don’t understand why you chose to unleash this much darkness.
i dont kniw whether u will read this but thank u thank u a lot for sharing your ordeals your experiences with us .i know what you have to went through and i wish no child or even a naive persron is to go through all these phases for being in love with someone who wont aporeciate their fantasy but instead will use them as a toy on the pretext of their partners vulnerability due to their childish druken fantasy
you my dear are only of the few saner people in this section .
when i started reading it i thought it will be some love noncon
but what i find is grooming conditioning of a naive girl by her own husband man trusted by her,her parents ger wellwishers and above all the man who is supposed to love her protect her from bad guyz out there
but instead he himself presented her in plate to others whoever gives him any advantage
he dehumanise her insulted her although she is already ashamed if being sexually repressed .all she needed was his love ,a little time and maybe some consesual bdsm even if he surprises her a lit bit but here she doesnt even know how many goid guys she is missing out who might made her come hard w/o hurting her changing her and letting be herself happily keeping her sexually satisfied with all her dignity and their privacy intact
he ruined wedding night their first time when she was actually really in mood ,her 1st honeymoon,her first homecoming as his wife
i dont know why the author made her so coward and dumb that she never realised she is being abused on mental level as well and never talked to her friends or was aware of sexual abuse as if the author had no escape plan fir an unwilling victim
as for the author i think he is anthony in real life has probably conditioned several victims overtime coz he brilliantly presents her pov despite being a man himself with every finer detail which gives only one possible reason the author himself us abusive and gets a kink from abusing unwilling partners
and the so called loose cunts dreaming if being eileen being jealous if her wishing for an anthony in their lives they are the priviledged one who managed to grow up w/o getting a single abuse to know the traumas they give lecture about noncon and bdsm to readers coz its always easy to fantasize but difficult to live with them as reality
p.s i think the marriage of anthony with eileen is probably fake someday he will vanish or throw her out on streets once done with her just lije our highly talented author turtles probably did in his real life looking out for another victim to toy with :(
oh you should continue otherwise how we would know about the limits you can go to fulfil your depravity to hurt break someone close to you since she is stupid enough to trust you
to the latest anon
yes this does exist in real life no need for movies .numerous women ,children are being traficked around the world they unwillingly in 3rd world countries ,you just have to go and book for thailand there is a whole network of child trafficking ,have a child sex tourism there children of all age regarless of gender who have to go through all these processes ,many are orphans many saperated from families and you know what no one needs their consent they dont even get paid all that matters is that tge author ,you and other likewise can have a pleasure harem there with every girl availble there bcoz all the girls believe that are nothing but 3 holes for men they exist for your pleasure go there and fetch a child wife as these days child marriage is a new trend in the US
and train her like he do
and if you have a girl child i really really wish she would go all the same things in real life so you can see it in movies with popcorns all the things he did will be done to your own daughter since you want it to happen to some real girl it should be your daughter your pleasure at your daughters expanse amen
I’ve read all the chapter and its fcking amazing eventhough sometimes i feel that her husband is so cruel to treated her like that .. after all this is a fantasy stories so it doesnt mean anything .. and yet for some reason if somewhere in this world this whole stories exist , i wanna see it in a movie hahaha .. thank you for the great amazing stories .. and hope you cant write more .. kudos to you
I like non con I’m not saying it’s a bad story I just don't understand when they have the opportunity to run for the hills early on, marriage or no I’d cut his dick off🤷♀️. Feel like she should have tried to get away in the beginning and her plans backfire or something but she just never tried, a bit dull when she immediately unrealistically submissive.
I loved every single chapter. It’s too bad something can’t happen like this in real life. Or, if it does, I’m sooo disappointed it hasn’t happened to me. Le sigh..... kudos babe!
Couldn't put it down. Read straight through for 3 hours or so. Wonderful story.
This story was amazing. Great details. You've got to write more. I'm going to share this one with my fiance'. He should read this. It's an excellent story.
I come back to this story time and time again. Please write more if you can!
Please, please, please tell me there is more of the story somewhere. Who wouldn't want be Eileen, I know I would. To be constantly on sexual tenter hooks, what a thrill.
Amanda
This is a story. It's not real life. It's called fantasy. I happened to enjoy it. It's in the non-consent category. There are rather a lot of chapters and rather a lot of pages to each section.if you didn't like it, why would you carry on reading it? The whole point of sites like this, is that people can explore their imagination. Who are you to judge others?
I'm not exactly sure why everybody is so upset about this story. It's under the heading of Nonconsent/Reluctance. You're the one reading it. It was long enough that you could have stopped reading it at any point. Some people read erotica like this because It's arousing to them, NOT because they would ever do those things.Why tell the author they're the one who is messed up when all he did was write a story.There were a few parts that were a little tough to read. It was my choice to keep reading. And, it was a bit heavy that I wouldn't recommend trying to read it all at once. It took me over a week. But overall, I think it was a great story. If you do it as it as an e-book, I would just make sure that it is in the right category. This is more than Nonconsent.
I loved it as an expression of sensuality with a twist. Critics lighten up and enjoy or don't read. We all have our positions/likes/dislikes in life. This was written with thought, depth, sexuality, an angle of forced perversion. Stick to Twitter.
To the author, I would love to see you continue.
Your story is so completely different than the one written here. Trust me when I say I understand what you went through, I was repeatedly sexually abused as a child as well.
The singular difference between our stories and hers is that our husbands love us, unconditionally. They understand our pain, guilt and the shame that we feel even though our logical brain tells us the truth, that none of it was our fault. Not even the death of the abuser frees you from the nightmares and the triggers.
The man in the story doesn’t love his wife, she’s a toy to him, for reasons that I don’t understand she feels as though she has no choice but to stay with him. From what I could stomach to read it’s not made clear why she doesn’t just leave. As much as I despise the word, because it makes me flinch every time, she has been “groomed”. I suppose the old fashioned term is that she’s been brain washed. Raped, tortured, brain washed, broken and conditioned to obey, he has dehumanised and objectified her every step of the way, then hidden it from polite society. Well it’s hidden until he tortures her more by ripping away the false protection of being amongst other people.
She started the story as sexual repressed but he’s a monster with no no conscience or compassion. By the end she’s a shell of a human being. IF it was consensual I’d be happy to read this but it’s not. Nobody has the right to treat another human being this way. For those weirdos who wish to be in her place grow the fuck up, I hope you never find yourself in a position where you have no choice. It’s a bad place.
To the author, clearly you have talent I don’t understand why you chose to unleash this much darkness.
This is just a story of rape and torture.
The author must be some small cocked bastard who never satisfied a woman and has been reduced to writing stories where he rapes and tortures.
Get some fucking help, you sick bastard.
Author, your rape sex doll fantasy may result in orgasmic satisfaction for some readers. But to others, it leaves us despairing. In this culture, The only time a woman enjoys her own sexuality, has lots of sex with whomever she wants must either first have her own agency removed as in this story, or is labeled a slut - as though it is bad to have sex as though humans are not blatantly sexual animals. Even though a male who indulges his sexuality, has sex with whomever he desires is celebrated. This disparity is at the root of today's rape culture and must be addressed if we are ever to live equally fulfilling and joyful lives.
I’m so glad I skipped it, whilst I haven’t read enough of the last page to find out how she feels about her new life he’s definitely still an arsehole. He may refer to her as his darling slave but he hasn’t said he loves her.
His objectification of her was so repulsive that I couldn’t read the story without getting angry. So in a way bravo to the author you definitely wrote realistic characters hopefully not autobiographical 😉
I love this story! So hot and sensual. I had never thought of this for myself but would love to try it. Why no drawings? This should be a movie series! I was working in the industry, might look into it.
Great story! Well developed, held my interest. I would be interested to read the e-book, as well as additional stories! A few couple chapters could be good, but you might run out of ideas, and it could become repetitive. Good writing!
I couldn't put this story down. I was sad when I reached the end. Now, at least, I'll be able to get things done around here. Looking forward to more of this story or a new one!
You are a very talented author if you decided to do ebooks i will look for your name
This story had excellent flow and good descriptive detail, much better than just about any I've read. Good command of grammar and usage...and it didn't go too fast! Nice, slow, graphic action. It was very sensual, a quality missing in just about every other work. It smacks of either exacting research or actual experience. Hard to think of any faults at all, given the limited genre (which stops short of my personal tastes) scope. I would have gone further, and not been quite as repetitive of some scenarios, and would have eliminated the dream or dreamlike parts. All in all, very professionally done. There was excitement on every page.
Please for the love of Christ turn this into an Ebook! I’d buy it! The details and scenarios you put into words are absolutely astounding! I’ve looked for a story similar to what you’ve written but THIS IS MUCH MORE THAN I COULD HAVE IMAGINED. The way that Anthony does everything for her sexual gratification while also enjoying the arousal it brings to Eileen is REAL LOVE. It’s borderline rape but it’s literally the only thing that makes her have an orgasm and the more she fights it, the more her alter ego ravishes in the sexual ecstasy.
I loved your story, it touched me on so many levels. I was horribly abused as a child and it wasn't until I met a man who could take my nightmares away from me, that I finally found release. Being told all my life I was to blame for what happened to me, made me never take control of my own body. I married the man that treated me kindly and didn't hurt me. Then he took over my body and forced me to feel pleasure, not pain. Even though I thought sex was a punishment, he showed me that it is one of the best things out there. I gave myself completely over to him two months ago with a contract. We've been married ten years and it took his patient love and lots of counseling for me to feel free and safe. I was different than Eileen but so much was the same.
This sexual discovery story is probably one of the best I have ever read. Intimately detailed and well paced. The only things I didn't like about it were how much of a mary-sue Anthony was. Never wrong, never making any mistakes. I would have liked to see him stumble at some point in her training and have to make amends for it himself. Perhaps seen her separated from him for a time to see how she copes no longer under his control mid way through training, ultimately returning.
Would have liked to see some of her mother too. Revealing her status as a sex slave. I liked the ending at the doctors office though it could do with an epilogue. Her recieving a brand new collar, custom made or getting down on her knees and thanking Anthony for turning her into a slave. It was a great read, none-the-less!
Having read all chapters... This is a good finale. Do I like to read more of this kind of stuff? By all means! A mark by hot iron would even be better than a tattoo.
Your story is exciting, erotic, romantic, loving and a reminder that we all submit to our partners on different levels in our relationship. While this story is fantasy, I believe that many will identify with the negative messages received during childhood about sex and sexual imaginations. These messages are often harmful and can haunt one for years as well as inhibit one's sexual experiences.
I sincerely enjoyed your thoughtful and insightful way of drawing your reader into your story while getting to know the main characters. I loved the feeling of being kept on edge while looking forward to the beginning of each new chapter. I am curious about how Eileen settles into her every day life as a confirmed sex slave and if she is able to finally let go of her guilt about her sexual inclinations. On the other hand, this story feels complete to me.
I too would like to see your story published as an ebook.
I look forward to reading more of your stories and wish you great success in your writings!
BEST STORY EVER!
Just Effin wow. More please. Perhaps similar themed story new characters.
THANK YOU for an amazing story.
mister turtle_writes!!
bragging on and on through 8 insufferably long chapters about the nasty public humiliations of anthony's attractive female partner Eileen!! tattooing sex slave on the nape of her neck and ringing the clit to commemorate the last day of her training?!!
and as usual the fussy self important fool attitude Eileen enjoys it.....loves it.....coz the master is me asserts Anthony!! :o
what do you and your hero Anthony take themselves to be?!!
the sheik of araby?! many elvis presleys rolled into one?!!
and if a jellyfish of a female is all thats required for 24x7 freak sex play,...japan has created a female mannequin ragdoll as a sex toy for freaks like Anthony!!! have it shipped...pronto u freaks!!!
human female beauty and liveliness is absolutely too wonderful and adorable to be dangerously wasted in the charge of freaks like Anthony!! he is a huge misfit in any place outside the worlds freakiest madmen asylum!!;)
I agree, I think it's worth having this be the end of the novella and going in a different direction with the next. One of the great things about this series is the conflict in her own head and the dichotomy with her body and reactions. Having that perspective interact with a broader BDSM story, especially one with other characters, given her interest in public use, could be very interesting. Also, having the non-consent aspect shift to "pushing boundaries" would be an interesting angle, since it's already pretty close.
But definitely publish it as an eBook. It's significantly better than the vast majority of self-published erotica on Amazon, so it should do well.
I've read from start to finish, even though this is way out there fantasy stuff to my mind, whereas I tend to like stories that keep one foot firmly in the reality camp. The reason I stayed with it was, mostly, the high quality of your writing and character development, which I think overcame my need for 'this could really happen.' It's a novella already, so you could continue with a Part Two, or start another. I was going to suggest the latter but a Part Two could be like something new, but with the background already established. Considering this is 'out there' fantasy you could have lots of fun with the next chunk.
I have spent this week reading this story. I have lost a lot of sleep because I couldn't stop reading. Would love to be able to get this story on my kindle.
Whatever you decide to do (more chapters or ebook) let us know! Love these characters & how much it turned me on!
You write beautifully. One of my favorites in Literotica. Keep up the good work. I'd like to see the story continue. You have a vivid imagination.
Your story was just amazing. The depth of your character development is inspiring. I hope you continue to submit more stories.
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
Hello. I really enjoyed the series. You understand the seduction of dominance and submission....it's all about the mind. I'm not one of those un-named critics who fail to understand that these stories are all pretend and not meant to reflect the real world but fun and creative and intended to be exciting treats. I found your stories to be exciting and delicious. Great writing!
Nat ; )
Your story kept me reading like I haven't in years (I stayed up past midnight two work nights in a row!) and left me hungry for more me. I commented anonymously before that I think you should have this story published and no, I don't mean as an eBook.
I look forward to reading more of your works!
I agree with verbicide's opinion on the morals or lack of that the characters exhibit. I think my alternative ending would have to include castration for Anthony and the doctor
I have to say this is one of the more interesting nonconsent series around, for a couple reasons. First off, it really delves into the potential of a whole subculture of sociopathic individuals to which this poor woman married into. The reasoning that "you have rape fantasies means you must actually want to be raped" is as about as accurate as "you have murder fantasies, therefore you must really desire to be a murderer" or "you like horror films, therefore you must desire to be terrified and tortured". It does however provide a spurious rationale for everything that happens to Eileen.
It is nice that she retains some semblance of reason even as the "stockholm syndrome" of her conditioning takes hold. Too often in this type of story the protagonist is brutalized and raped, but suddenly realizes that being relentlessly emotionally and sexually abused is "just what she always secretly wanted", giving justification for her abusers actions. In this story, even at the end, she's not sure everything happening is what she wants or simply what she's being conditioned to accept, which is far more realistic.
Granted, as someone who worked for a good number of years in the health care profession and dealt with the trauma, both physical and emotional, that abusers like Eileen's husband inflict on their victims, my personal imagined ending to this is likely far different than most people simply using this as a stroke story. Still, it's well written and for that, the author deserves kudos.
What a wonderful journey you have taken your readers on. Bravo! My only quibble is that he didn't punish her severely enough or often enough...all those toys in the attic that didn't get used. What a pity! Keep up the good work and I hope you publish it. And to your nay-sayers; Shame on you! You wouldn't know a good story if it slapped you in the face, apparently.
Greatly enjoyed the story. Interesting how you left out any description of Eileen's physical attributes, leaving it to the reader's imagination. It makes her somewhat of an "any woman". Well done!
OMFG this whole series is amazing.
i didnt want it to end
i could totally see myself as Eileen.
it needs to go on
Unlike some stories, this is written like a professional writer. Came many times reading it. My only small criticism, I liked it that in the beginning Eileen kept saying she only did things because he made her do things. By the end she still had a touch of resistance. Would love to have seen her begging to be as depraved as he wanted her to be and freely admitting (and displaying) just how slutty she WANTED to be. I fell in love with Eileen.
All I can say is at least you put it in the right category. That's the only good thing I can come up with.
I love this story I have never read such an interesting story before. I would really appreciate if you would continue this story because you have done such an amazing job and when I'm done reading a chapter I end up very wet. Due continue and I give you 5 stars for this story.
and while one could nit and one could pick, it is a heck of an achievement.
Being submissive is fine and good, but this story was too close to actual damaging abuse for me. I wouldn't recommend this story. It's just too upsetting.
The characters and progression of this story were both fantastic, and I particularly enjoy how you strayed from the norm and kept a part of the sub defiant even at the very end. I would have liked to see more of Samantha's desire to lay claim to Eileen, but that's a minor gripe. As it is, I'm happy with this ending. You've given your readers a satisfying conclusion to the story that was promised, while leaving our imaginations open to future possibilities. Bravo to you.
A disgusting tale of torture and abuse. Even for fiction this was awful.
very good story would love to read more of her adventures into deep slavery
Excellent, wow! Please don't take these thoughts as criticism, only trying to offer thoughts that you may consider for publishing what could be a quite successful book.
Perhaps a little more at the beginning on other clues Anthony saw that confirmed what her need was. More reluctant consent initially would make this even better for me (and perhaps help if you publish). Would love to see the story start a little earlier to see this build up.
I agree with the person who wrote butterflies inside needs a few other analogies (not that it's not great, just mix up a few different references depending on the new experience, cresting the top of a roller coaster, spinning vertigo ...).
I wonder if as things progress having Eileen tell herself she won't say "no anthony" and "please" for the next lesson, she convinces herself she'll try to suggest some alternative or failing that focus on something non-sexual. I think women multi-task mentally, perhaps that's why some will think of other things in life during sex. Showing her mind do this at the beginning then changing over time to muliplte images of sex flashing through her mind is a thought.
You are an amazing story teller!
This entire series has had me riveted! Please keep going in any format / genre you wish!
Loved the story in all. I think you did a great job of not using the same punishments over and over. You were very creative there.
I also loved that Anthony cared deeply for her. There are too many stories out there where the sex slave isn't cared for. The release from continual use and abuse to give Eileen moments of a semi normal life where she feels cared for and her needs met would only deepen her attachment to Anthony.
I'd love to see more of their story, but I also think you have the talent to be published. If you have written stories that are available on kindle, I hope I can find them.
sex slave will always be Anthonys' canvas to use, share and certainly abuse! Humiliation is her best friend! One of the best female "training" stories ever written! Thanks!
Hey Turtle, this is a yummy story!
I'd add a small critique: I'd have preferred the doctor to not get his own dick out to examine Eilleen; rather he should have a supply of horny dicks that relieve themselves at the Doctors clinic for the purpose of medical progress (participating in medical progress could be work for the county prisoners, or the local Uni fraternity etc.)
As for Eilleens future, she should have quantitative daily targets for her orgasms so that she becomes a record holder... at some point if she dissappoints Anthony he should force her to go and find a new young trainee for him and then divorce her; maybe keeping her as hired help to look after the new trainee-wife.
As for the Doctor, he could start a number of business ventures, maybe with Anthony as an investor; for example once he has women in almost permanent heavy lubrication, he could start selling cunt juice over the web. A whole range: Teen juice, Milf juice, Slut juice etc.
Wow!!! I just loved this story! Like any wonderful book, I was so sad when it ended. I'm going to read it again but I would love more chapters!!!
Fantastic story and I think a couple more chapters would be great. Perhaps more involvement of the nurse and maybe some forced interracial. Anyway a big thank you and keep up the good work.
i read the complete series, and i must say that it was amazing. and i am a hundred percent with you if you decide to publish it as an ebook. hope i get to read more works like this.
My wife and I really enjoyed this story, your skills, your thoughts were displayed perfectly in this story, continue on with it, and better yet, write more stories, would love to see this story made into a film
That was a very well written and thought out story. You're a gifted erotic writer. Each chapter made me cum so much. Great story. Thank you.
She goes straight to the Police and he spends the rest of his life in prison, where he is repeatedly raped by his cell mates. She gets all his money and lives happily every after, marrying a handsome, wealthy, young man that worships her. The REAL end. Because this crappy story was so bad it needed a good ending. Can't believe I wasted my time reading this. BARF!
I was always waiting for her to fight back, wasn't really that much of a non-consent since she doesn't even try to get away, huh guess not.
I just kept thinking about how the whole time since the marriage she never spoke to her mother and she never came to visit, I'd really like to read about her mothers reaction/involvement
please keep going although would love her to retaliate and fight back and win occasionally and please more chapters its very readable
Over the last several years, I've probably read over 300 stories on this subject. I also enjoy writing and fantasising about what could be done to me. Your story nailed it! I love your writing style and your thought process. BEST storyline I have read so far! Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in your future!
I waited till I finished the entire story before commenting. This is probably one of the best stories on any erotic website. I really enjoyed your style of writing. It actually gave me am emotional connection to the characters in the book! Some people might not understand why you had to semi repeat different scenes. We had to go through them with her to experience the joy she felt knowing she was pleasing her Master. Plus you can't just expect people to assume these things were happening. Your book touched me on so many levels...as a writer, a submissive, and as a woman! I hope you continue on to make this a book!! I found it a much better read than The Story of O!!!
I am starting to think that from either BDSM or Noncon if there is a mention of "training" in the title or story description that it all becomes boringly predictable, one knows the plot and dialogue of the story before even reading the words.
I enjoyed this story a lot. They were moments that took me utterly by surprise in a very pleasant way. I am not sure if you are still writing as I don't see anything posted on here in a while but I hope that you continue. You have a great talent.
This was a great story and i really hope you write more. I am also a sub and while I dont really go for being shared and neither does my Master we both truly enjoy your writing style and storyline *smiles* please continue writing
I absolutely loved this story! And for the record, I am a sub....It was very nice to read in my downtime and kept me quite wet for my Master when he allows me to cum.... Please keep writing, your style was very artistic and kept me wanting more... I read the story from beginning to end and would love to read more.... The first few chapters before her surrender were my favorite.... Again, I loved it, thank you
Well you've certainly got the mechanics down, it was very predictable to the point of me having to skim read it to get through each different thing he put her through and her repeated identical response to each new sex act. It does have good bones though if you wanted to give them some personality, some background, a bit of good plot and anticipation. Draw the reader in instead of just handing it slam bang on the plate each time.
Thanks my opinion anyway. Thanks for the effort you did put into it and good luck with your writing.
Previous comment! If you don't like this type of thing- dont read it!! Subbies do love it- it's fantasy- get over yourselves!
If you wanted to train something get a dog. Or a horse. It takes a pretty sick puppy to treat another human being this way.
You need to stop now because you beginning to get tacky. Right up to the end of the last evaluation with the doctor, everything was going fine. Up until that point, everything was elegant enough! But the tatoos and piercings are tacky and not consonant with the rest of the story. So, stop now before you ruin a perfectly good fantasy story! Stop where the doctor declares her to be a bonafide sex slave.
after the nurses comment about all Anthony's done so Eileen could be satisfied I thought maybe he set up everything including the "institute" to fulfill her fantasies. What would you do if you loved someone that seriously sexually repressed.
Please stop! It's unbelievable. She would have had him thrown in jail before chapter one was finished. You think you can treat people worse than any animal and they'll accept it? Don't think so. What a bunch of junk. A total waste of time to read.
This story starts off very disturbing (actually, rather revolting) esp. the first few chapters until you realize that female character somehow "needs" it and her husband is fulfilling it. I seriously doubt it mysef if it is best for her to be enslaved, but he apparently has her convinced. The doctor visits are the least interesting, so I mainly skipped them. I would shorten them to only have the barest included. I think you are a talented writer and you should continue new adventures of this couple if you have new places they can go. The most interesting part for me was their relationship and her eventual submission. I also dirty language he uses, even though there isn't much of it. Good luck with your writing.
Just finished ch.8 please write more, loved it, great story one of the best.A 10 all the way.
I read all installments. Some were quite interesting and stimulating. Chapter 7 and 8 were less enthralling and captivating.
If I just may make on comment on the character of Anthony: he's nothing more than a whining little boy. At least he prepares dinner regularly ;-)
As I find it rude to post anonymous replies - unfortunately I don't have a user account but I'm known as Casso. Thank you turtle_writes for all your work and effort! Overall it was a very nice story!
Amazing series, you could have so much more fun with this :)
I have LOVED this story. Start to finish...it has been fantastic!!!!!!!
Wow GREAT story! i loved it and had a really hard time putting it down till the end. (Not to mention the continuous need to touch myself while i was reading... this story was making me so wet at times i just couldnt help it. *blushes*) the first few stages of Eileen's training where the best :-) i'm looking forward to passing this along to my Love and hearing (and feeling) his thoughts on it too :-) thank you sooo much for sharing this. Cheers!
Awesome story. I could not stop reading. Definitely make another one! =]
I read this all the way through, very hard to turn the computer off to go to bed this is a great story and I feel the ending for Chapter 7 should be the end after all her getting Marked and tatooed was a perfet ending it was the first day of the rest of her life as your slave Perfect ending to a perfect written story I look foreward to reading more of your materials Thank you for writing it
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I absolutely loved this story. I read it the first time when I was home sick for a week with pneumonia, and it made me completely forget that I was sick. I just kept reading and reading, and was completely enthralled by the story, even the parts that were hard to read, i.e. the tattoo and piercing scenes were difficult for me to accept. That said, I continued to think about this story, even while I read countless ebooks in all other genres, including erotica. This is by far the most compelling and stimulating book I've read, ever!! Please publish it. I think you'll make tons of money!!
I read 50 Shades and it is a good love story. This however was a much better and interesting read. My husband and I really enjoyed it. Husband didn't read, but got benefits.
I am not into pain or bondage in real life or fantasy. Being exhibited / humiliated in public is a fantasy.
This story is so well written that it kept me excited to the end, which is rare for this type of story. I now will read everything you've written.
I have never commented on a story I've read before and I've been reading for at least a decade. This is, hands down, the very best I've read. I've read the entire thing and it's incredibly well written. If dreck like 50 Shades can get published, you should be able to, easily!!
I, without a doubt, absolutely HAVE to agree with the majority of the comments that I've read. This IS most likely the most well-written story out there. I normally can't stand reading the longer stories on this site (any site actually) because they spend to much time on introductions or dialogue or descriptions of the characters. But you were able to give me a firm grounding of the characters and the events occurring around them. I actually found myself looking forward to reading your seven-page chapters, and the "what would Anthony do next" factors. Due to the fact that I have a vagina, I tend to fall into the category of female despite my enormous libido. I, myself have plenty of fantasies, a lot of them rape based and being forced. Your writing conveys everything perfectly. Inbetween orgasms I usually loose whatever interest I had in the piece I was reading, and with your story the only reason i stopped is because i wanted to savor this for as long as possible. YES, this did take me a couple of days to read entirely, and it was worth it.
I know that this is very wordy, but i feel like its necessary. Keep up the great work :-) you can be famous someday.
I read all of the chapters and got really turned on by the sex. The bruising isn't my thing but the bondage was great. The writing is really good. I prefer it when there is less coarse language and this is very good.
I keep thinking of this story and the characters. How many women would want a man like Anthony? It's a great story. An ebook could be a great idea and perhaps at some point it could be made cable or dvd... But please, keep writing!
Awesome story!!!please continue really well done!!!!love it!!!!
I have to admit, this is the absolute best one I have read to date and I've done a lot of reading over the years!! You have managed to cover every aspect of arousal, as far as I am concerned. I would love to see more!!!!! :))
Thank you so much! <3
Just finished reading the entire story - it took me a few days. You had some serious psychologically sound background into Eileen's submissiveness. This rivals - or excels - any of the professionally-written published porn I've read, including "The Story of O" and the Anne Rocquelaure/Rice's "Sleeping Beauty" series. You should definitely publish it! And I want to read more of the "Further Adventures of . . . ."
Great story, truly it is, however I agree with the Anonymous user who posted on May 15. Eileen doesn't seem overly confident in her role and while I know it would no longer count as nonconsent at that point, I would love to see her try to get free and "find herself" some. Since someone pointed out that a story called "Training" should end when the training is done, perhaps it could be the starting point of another series? And then the eBook could be published with both portions under a different title. The extent or depth of Eileen's internal turmoil was the only thing that I wish had been a little different or at least been resolved. Still: bravo!
I come back time and time again and I cum time and time again. I've just read that erotic ebook thats topping the download list right now and didn't raise a heartbeat but it made me come back for another fix of Antony. Super hot! As many others has said, the best series on Literotica bar none. You are skilled!
Great story!
Would love to see the girl start having second thoughts about her current situation, though. She doesn't seem to be that sure about where things are going now and the guy seems to be enjoying it a tad too much. He was supposedly doing all of this because he was crazy about her and wanter her to truly enjoy their sex-life but looks like things have gone too far...I don't know just an idea!
Perhaps you could write a sequel where she decides to escape or whatever and he goes after her...it'd be be nice to see how all that played out!
Just finished reading the whole series, great work as I am sure you are already aware. I found I was unable to stop thinking about this until I finished the last line. I do think you ended it at a good spot, although I would love to catch up with them down the road, how will they handle children?
While I am turned on by thoughts of forced, controlled sex, I keep it in the fantasy realm. Since this is fiction, I am not sure why folks get so upset by it. But, that is what makes a great story, controversey. thanks for a great read!
This one of the best I've read.
As to your question about continuing, I really think you hit the perfect place to end this one. I used to love Anne Rice books, but they soon became boring when they went on and on and on.
As to a new story, I would love to read the doctor's story. Is he married? What is his life like? And I would love to read his other cases, the different treatments, etc,
No clue why people would read non-consent tagged story and then complain about the non-consent; especially as she was married to him, chose to stay with him, was an active participant in her training, and he obviously paid vivid attention to her own needs and desires so well with the activities involved! I saw love and care there. . . yes, he was willing to take on the role she needed for her satisfaction to be met!
Very pleasurable story. . . I too enjoyed the idea of being trained so well and so thoroughly! Each chapter took me a few sittings to be able to read completely, making for some awesome times when I was forced to leave the text and interact with the world. Your descriptive writing style, full of feeling and believable motivations really helped your impactful story come to life *grin*
Thank you for the wonderful tale!!
you continue this series. I love the idea of bondage and being used for sex against my will, however: I'm not sure I want to make it a reality. Reading your stories, and especially this series, has me thinking about the possibility of making it happen. I love the way Anthony takes charge and I could respond to that. What does that say about me?
Oh, goodness this story makes me so hot! Some people don't understand the concept of fantasy, saying it is disgusting. I was raped, and this story still turns me on. I want more! Bravo!
It's so sad dat rape turns u on! Moreover such humiliation...n da worst is dat he doesn't show an ounce of love..ever heard of bdsm u bitch? Clearly u haven't.
If many of the things described in this story ever happened to you (or your wife) in real life, would you find it so exciting? Somehow I doubt it...
Wow!! Loved the story. I don't usually like gang rape etc. scenes, but you incorporated it so well by linking it to her fantasy, that the story would have lacked something without it. I would love to read another chapter , but I honestly think you should leave us readers wanting more. Looking forward to reading new stories from you!!
I had to read this again from the start and I still feel it is the best story on the site! The only part I dislike is the contract, because if something happened to her husband she could be very mistreated. I would love a stand alone story with these characters or a new one closely paralleling it like them helping Anthony's brother, train his wife etc.
I read each one of these chapters and it took me right along Eileen's journey. Thank you it was awesome and so wish there was more to read. Please consider more chapters.