by BlissMara
An intimate 19 minutes of longing and desire.
Powerful images, sensuously portrayed.
Well done!
The emotional abyss of longing for something out of reach, well-painted with words of dark colors.
Thanks for sharing.
Distance, when hearts should be beating against each other through ephemeral skin.
The symmetry of grey clouds and water beside a wasted desert town-- I identify with this so much. Lovely poem! please keep them coming!