- Erotic Poetry
- atlas
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the atlas assures that
from the west to the east coast
is as far as
from the east to poland
the calendar decided long ago
that the distance from birth to emigration
is shorter than from emigration to death
that the weather is beautiful
californian
will be shown by a digital camera
with a super-wonderful resolution
it's harder to see details
in the images
painted by memory
wh,
2006-05-05
- COMMENTS
for the last three lines, no other grabbers, more like gab
signed
MNS
maybe
but remember you said I shouldn't exist
Only one word to describe this: brilliant
Extremely well crafted with simple but effective imagery. I loved that second stanza and that ending was superb.
Deserves a 10
p.s your poem has been mentioned on todays reviews
Vampiredust