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Click hereIt is easier to blame myself
Nobody is more accountable for I
epiphany tells me why
It is easier to stay quiet
And watch the world go by
Than drive on a meandering path through it.
This doesn't come without consequence though
the serious things overwhelm
the serious things take control
Can't laugh or communicate
Your reputation has been good, bad
Now you focus on what you've never had
It is easier to shut up
It is easier to not care
But ease never got anyone anywhere.
- COMMENTS
Your theme is interesting and has potential, but it might benefit from more refection and effort.
In particular, the four lines in the middle where the rhyme is dropped seem to stand out when the poem is read.
Ease never wrote a good poem either.
Keep writing