- Erotic Poetry
- indulgence
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Click here"Indulge me."
As if I wouldn't.
As if there were anything
I would not do for her.
But knowing me
as she does,
words are my playthings.
(I can see her rolling her eyes
at my lurid smile.)
I must twist the meaning
in my own decadent way.
Indulge.
To offer an indulgence.
The manner in which a priest
could offer forgiveness
of a sin yet to be committed.
So I sigh,
with a silent groan,
and wonder what sin
she has in mind.
- COMMENTS
and this poem confirms it in a lovely sexy way. I do wonder about the narrator in this poem though because it's about you and her but seems to be addressed to someone else (the reader I know). I think it would be stronger overall if you kept it between "I" and "you." That would make it feel more intimate which I think you want with this kind of poem. But....just my opinion, dahling. xxoo
sin and priest contrast highlights the verse, and one can understand the feeling. Hopefully most have felt the same intensity.