- Non-Erotic Poetry
- lost?
Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click hereI was lost in space
yesterdays tomorrow
thoughts were
brutally borrowed
there was no time to think
tornado words with out a warning
silently calling
to 'damn' many mental pot holes
on a gray matter interstate
while running flat footed as a crow
standing
over an open man hole
but I saw the light
of darkness
in a sign
there it wasn't
flying like a sitting rock
yelling nothing at all
like a black and white souls worth
as if it were an edition
the futures news paper
reading me
well just ask me!
I know,
I don't know
with all that I know
that I know
'wanker-doodle nothing
about what I don't know
other than
what I really know
which is what you want to know
is there anything worth
knowing to know
or am I
lost?
you know what I mean?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(I found the muse at RF's 'one word' "lost" that took more than one word to get lost in, on a muse night)
- COMMENTS
I had so much fun that night writing poems
and bouncing with you. This poem, was a riot
to read, and crazy ... just like us eh~
Thank you for the mention,
... you are a Sweetie Pie~
something must of set
you a fire !
what use of metaphor you
have going here,
reminds me of ,
one bright day,
in the middle of the night...
....and so I am off to the
rest, if as good as this ?
I will need a chain
to smoke , LOL..
-sGp-
but this line kicks ass:
to 'damn' many mental pot holes
***
that feels something like i would write.....don
What a different style and so creative too. Your muse sure was tickling your fancy on this.