by brucewayneegypt
I enjoy blackmail stories where the girls are put in a hard position, but this somehow felt really cheap and tasteless. Maybe because of the protagonist being portrayed as an extreme jerk that's all. There's nothing more to him. No way to find what he is doing attractive cuz u can't bring yourself to find him attractive
Right from the start theres no incentive to know the characters and get into story. So many previous works are much better. Although not completing one series and moving on to build the universe seems to rushed. Opening up to my mom is still a cliff hanger. How can you think other people to remember characters from that story appearing in thier own. This isn't mcu let stories be thier own.
What the crap is this? Were you high or something when you were writing this?
At least proof read it once before putting it out.