- Erotic Poetry
- Poem for My Wife
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Click hereNo longer young,
enfolding your long body
in chill of dawn,
we are the banked coals of an old fire—
still a steady, even heat
- COMMENTS
quite quite lovely
contented feel to this
and banked fires can be drawn to flame
That was beautiful. Usually in a case of very few words said, the reader is given little material to draw associations from. This was not the case here.
This is an excellent description of aging love in very few, non flowery, words
Agree about the last two lines, they are very nice. I was confused by lines 2-3, though — what is enfolding her long body in chill of down?
Thank you for sharing the poem.