- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Rusted Chain
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Click hereHolding them down
Against a wall
From running free
Drag at their time
Drain their energy
Hold their dedication
My broken body is
Their rusted chain
Their love for me
Is a key they won’t use
To go free
Sympathy is warden
That holds them bound
To my manacle being
My dependent carcass
Is their albatross
- COMMENTS
My sweet, sweet friend; In the eyes of "them", they would never see you as a rusted chain. You are brilliant! And, I think you have a great sense of humor and even when you are "dark" you are still my light! *heartya! *
......and moving. You convey your situation and the emotions it brings well. Love heals if we let it.
and express the emotions strong. the idea of a rusted chain adds weight, strength and corrosion to the piece, which is reflected within
Is their albatross
What depth of emotion : excellence in verse !
Very deep, strikes me as a piece about love and commitment, perhaps familial?