- Illustrated Poetry
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- COMMENTS
I thought this poem was quite unique in that it's very different from others that I've read. It also describes almost exactly what I see in my mind when I'm programming my electronic synthesizers and then performing that which I've designed, sequenced and programmed my keyboards to play. Once again great work!
Over-zealous electrodes peak, distorting vision.
Nice line...gave this a 5!
and nice words too--though I would still cut more. Lose "cracked" from l1,
"like a plague" from L2. What do you think, ink? x
Very nice. The image of the ink and the font sets the mood even before poem, which is edgy and thought-provoking.